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The advantages provided by English as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement? v.2

The advantages provided by English as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. v. 2
Over the last few decades, English has been becoming the global dialect. Nowadays, you see English across the globe. Whether it is a village or a big city, you find it everywhere. While a couple of people do not like English to be a global speech, many accepted it. This essay will discuss the advantages about having English as a global sound and my opinion on it. Firstly, English has provided us a common platform to communicate, consequently, people from different geographical locations can have hassle free communication. English has not only provided a better way of communication, but also brought nations together. For instance, any person picked from any country, state, or town can communicate easily with any other person (any other country). Secondly, English has become more sophisticated than ever; furthermore, all the research goes in English. Whether it is biological research or technological research, all the new words are available in English, comparatively, other languages miss these words. There is a plethora of resources available in English. For example, if we pick any other dialect, you cannot find or learn new topics or books. Either you need to wait for that book to be translated or you get it translated. To conclude, we must need a global expression to break the international barriers. English has already become the global language, and it is used across the countries; bringing up a new language takes another few or many decades to reach this level. Hence, in favour of humanity, it is best to keep English only the global language.
Over the last few decades, English has been becoming the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
dialect. Nowadays, you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
English across the globe. Whether it is a village or a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
city, you find it everywhere. While a couple of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do not like English to be a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
speech,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
it. This essay will discuss the advantages about having English as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
sound and my opinion on it.

Firstly
, English has provided us a common platform to communicate,
consequently
,
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people
from
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different
geographical locations can have hassle free communication. English has not
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only
provided a better way of communication,
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but
also
brought nations together.
For instance
, any person picked from any country, state, or town can communicate
easily
with any
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other
person (any
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other
country).

Secondly
, English has become more sophisticated than ever;
furthermore
, all the research goes in English. Whether it is biological research or technological research, all the new words are available in English,
comparatively
,
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other
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languages
miss these words. There is a plethora of resources available in English.
For example
, if we pick any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
dialect, you cannot find or learn new topics or books. Either you need to wait for that book to
be translated
or you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it translated.

To conclude
, we
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must
need a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
expression to break the international barriers. English has already become the
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global
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language
, and it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
across the countries; bringing up a new
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language
takes another few or
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many
decades to reach this level.
Hence
, in
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favour
of humanity, it is best to
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keep
English
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only
the
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global
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language
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The advantages provided by English as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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