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The advantages of the spread of the English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

The advantages of the spread of the English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. v. 1
In these years, there is a growing recognition that English is well on its way to becoming the dominant global language. The impact of this trend is a subject of intense debate, it is my opinion that advantages of a dominant global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. The rise of a global language is a facilitator of cross cultural communication and the communication between people with different language backgrounds. In different areas of global communication, such as science and news, recognizing a common language removes communication barriers and increases convenience. On many formal occasions, English, as a working language, boosts efficiency and avoids misunderstanding. Likewise, the exchange of essential information like know-how and technologies will be tremendously prompted. One might argue that the rise of a global language would endanger other languages, in belief that an increasing number of people have turned to English as their first language. This viewpoint is flawed. The spread of global English has little, if any, influence on non-English-speakers’ language proficiency. People might be motivated to learn English as a foreign language but do not necessarily drop their native language because learning beginners or intermediate level English is sufficient for day-to-day communication. The dominance of English as a global language is, therefore, not a cause of the loss of language diversity. Its negative effect is reflected mainly in cultural imperialism. As international media recognizes English as its root language, most of the broadcast information is related to the lifestyle, norms and beliefs of English-speaking countries. It might over time put many minority cultures on the verge of extinction, when those ethnic groups gradually adopt the Western culture. The effects of shrinking cultural diversity are destructive, causing people to live in a simple and monotonous world and think and act in similar ways. The development of English is overall, a positive global trend. It connects people who previously spoke different languages and enables them to exchange ideas, although it might lead to the loss of cultural diversity.
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global
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language
. The impact of this trend is a subject of intense debate, it is my opinion that advantages of a dominant
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global
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language
will continue to outweigh its disadvantages.

The rise of a
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global
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language
is a facilitator of cross
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cultural
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communication
and the
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communication
between
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people
with
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different
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language
backgrounds. In
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different
areas of
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global
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communication
, such as science and news, recognizing a common
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language
removes
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communication
barriers and increases convenience. On
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many
formal occasions, English, as a working
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language
, boosts efficiency and avoids misunderstanding.
Likewise
, the exchange of essential information like know-how and technologies will be
tremendously
prompted.

One
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might
argue that the rise of a
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global
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language
would endanger other
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languages
, in belief that an increasing number of
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people
have turned to English as their
first
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language
. This viewpoint
is flawed
. The spread of
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global
English has
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little
, if any, influence on non-English-speakers’
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language
proficiency.
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People
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might
be motivated
to learn English as a foreign
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language
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but
do not
necessarily
drop their native
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language
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because
learning beginners or intermediate level English is sufficient for day-to-day communication.

The dominance of English as a
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global
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language
is,
therefore
, not a cause of the loss of
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language
diversity. Its
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negative
effect
is reflected
mainly
in
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cultural
imperialism. As international media recognizes English as its root
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language
, most of the broadcast information
is related
to the lifestyle, norms and beliefs of English-speaking countries. It
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might
over time put
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many
minority cultures on the verge of extinction, when those ethnic groups
gradually
adopt the Western culture. The effects of shrinking
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cultural
diversity are destructive, causing
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people
to
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live
in a simple and monotonous world and
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think
and act in similar ways.

The development of English is
overall
, a
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positive
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global
trend. It connects
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people
who previously spoke
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different
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languages
and enables them to exchange
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ideas
, although it
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might
lead to the loss of
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cultural
diversity.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The advantages of the spread of the English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
333 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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