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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. to what extend do you agree or disagree? v.3

The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. v. 3
Having a global language plays a vital role in modern life. Undeniably, it has a powerful influence on the way we see the world, and its effect is often positive. It seems that it provides human beings a useful source by which they can remove communicational barriers. This essay seeks to discuss that having a global language is helpful in at least three main reasons. First and foremost, having a global language can be very helpful for those people who want to communicate with others with different language backgrounds. For one thing, on many occasions, English as a working language, boost efficiency and avoid misunderstanding. For instance, many world-class football clubs attend to hire young players from other countries and even different continents to take cost-cutting measures. They need to learn English as the only way to go through as a united team. Another thing is that in different parts of global communication such as news, it is very beneficial. As an illustration, BBC as a colossal international broadcasting channel consists of numerous multicultural staff that all of them speak as a united language. Second, it is often suggested that having a global language can reduce the gap between nations. In the first place, an excellent communication system because having a clear understanding between business partners and colleagues will entail a tremendous international financial success. An example may help clarify the point. In Singapore, since they have embraced the English language, they have seen impressive economic growth in recent years. In the second place, international trades such as the importing and exporting of goods will help the national economy. As things stand right now, having a global language help to the growth of the economy around the world much more than we think it does. Last but not least, having a global language seems to improve our acknowledge and information about the outside world. First, Doctor Stefan one of the enchanted faculty members of Cambridge University, states that English linguistic remains the international language of almost all of the top universities around the globe. English exams are one of the essential qualifications to study abroad among the best scientists. The latest figures released by The United Nations of Scientific and Cultural Organization (UNESCO) reflect that having a global language never kills other cultures, on the contrary, it helps them to survive. In other words, English as a global language can be a fantastic opportunity for people who like to discover unknown facts about the history of humanity. Based on the above, it can be stated that the spread of English as a global language is meritorious. Nevertheless, the question is: Can English as a global language improve the health and happiness of humans in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, English continues to influence every aspect of our every day lives.
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plays a vital role in modern life.
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, it has a powerful influence on the way we
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see
the world, and its effect is
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positive
. It seems that it provides human beings a useful source by which they can remove
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communicational
barriers. This essay seeks to discuss that
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having
a
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global
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language
is helpful in at least three main reasons.

First
and foremost,
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a
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global
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can be
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very
helpful for those
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people
who want to communicate with others with
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different
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language
backgrounds. For one thing, on
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many
occasions, English as a working
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language
, boost efficiency and avoid misunderstanding.
For instance
,
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many
world-
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class
football clubs attend to hire young players from
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other
countries and even
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different
continents to take cost-cutting measures. They need to learn English as the
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only
way to go through as a united team. Another thing is that in
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different
parts of
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global
communication such as news, it is
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very
beneficial. As an illustration, BBC as a colossal
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international
broadcasting channel consists of numerous multicultural staff that all of them speak as a united language.

Second, it is
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often
suggested that
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having
a
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global
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language
can
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reduce
the gap between nations. In the
first
place, an excellent communication system
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because
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having
a
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clear
understanding between business partners and colleagues will entail a tremendous
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international
financial success. An example may
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help
clarify the point. In Singapore, since they have embraced the English
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language
, they have
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seen
impressive economic growth in recent years.

In the second place,
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international
trades such as the importing and exporting of
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goods
will
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help
the national economy. As things stand right
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now
,
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a
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to the growth of the economy around the world much more than we
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it does.

Last
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not least,
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seems to
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and information about the outside world.
First
, Doctor Stefan one of the enchanted faculty members of Cambridge University, states that English linguistic remains the
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international
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language
of almost
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all of the
top universities around the globe. English exams are one of the essential qualifications to study abroad among the best scientists. The latest figures released by The United Nations of Scientific and Cultural Organization (UNESCO) reflect that
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a
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global
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never kills
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other
cultures,
on the contrary
, it
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helps
them to survive. In
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other
words, English as a
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global
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language
can be a fantastic opportunity for
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people
who like to discover unknown facts about the history of humanity.

Based on the above, it can
be stated
that the spread of English as a
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global
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language
is meritorious.
Nevertheless
, the question is: Can English as a
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global
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language
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improve
the health and happiness of humans
in general
?
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Only
time will
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tell
,
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in the meantime, English continues to influence every aspect of our every day
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lives
.
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44Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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To have another language is to possess a second soul.
Charlemagne

IELTS essay The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. v. 3

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
474 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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