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The advantages brought by the spread of English as “a global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree with this view? v.1

The advantages brought by the spread of English as “a global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. with this view? v. 1
English is a universal language spoken and understood by most countries. For nations whose lingua franca is not English, a large number of people either spoke or understood English. I partly agree with the opinion that the merits of English as a global language outweigh the demerits with the following reasons. On the one hand, English Language as a worldwide accepted language of communication has made the world a global village. Also, communication and interaction is no more a difficult task to people. Nowadays, People from various countries can get involved in business transactions with this language. For instance, international trade can be achieved with the use of English as global language. Therefore, the world is becoming a global village with this particular language which is spoken and understood by people of different continents around the world. On the other hand, the native language of some countries and tribes are being overshadowed by the use of English language. Most countries no longer teach their local languages in schools especially. For example, many schools in Nigeria teach children in English due to this, native languages are disregarded. Howevere in generations to come most children will never know that their native language once existed. Therefore, English language has almost replaced a number of local languages. In conclusion, although English language has made the world united in terms of communication which has boasted international trade, So many Local languages belonging to countries and tribes are been suppressed and at the risk of phasing out due to the popularity of English language.
English is a universal
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a large number of
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either spoke or understood English. I partly
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language
outweigh the demerits with the following reasons.

On the one hand, English
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as a worldwide
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language
of communication has made the world a
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global
village.
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people
. Nowadays,
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from various
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countries
can
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get
involved in business transactions with this
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language
.
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, international trade can
be achieved
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use
of English as
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global
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.
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, the world is becoming a
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global
village with this particular
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language
which
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and understood by
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people
of
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different
continents around the world.

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, the native
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countries
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use
of English
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. Most
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countries
no longer teach their local
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languages
in schools
especially
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,
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many
schools in Nigeria teach children in English due to this, native
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languages
are disregarded
.
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in generations to
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come
most children will never know that their native
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language
once existed.
Therefore
, English
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language
has almost replaced a number of local languages.

In conclusion
, although English
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language
has made the world united in terms of communication which has boasted international trade,
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So
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many
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languages
belonging to
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countries
and tribes
are been
suppressed and at the
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risk
of phasing out due to the popularity of English
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language
.
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IELTS essay The advantages brought by the spread of English as “a global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. with this view? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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