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The advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? v.2

The advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language will outweigh the disadvantages. with this view? v. 2
The world is very big and every country has their own language. But the benefits given by the spread of English as a world language will outweigh the drawbacks. I largely agree with the statement. My reasons are justified further. Discussing the merits, the foremost advantage is the communication will become much easier in the world because there are many people in every country who know English due to this tourist who visit foreign country they can communicate very easily. Similarly, people who want to study abroad can also study comfortably. In this way, people can connect with the foreigners and learn their culture and enhance their knowledge. Moreover, it will also help in trade and business, English helps to company to grow the speed of work by outsourcing. In this situation, if the language is same, so we can do work faster and can also open beaches in the other countries. In addition to that, local tourism industry on which local business depends it also can be grew and it helps in the economic development of the nation. On the other side, local languages can be disappeared due to this step. Because more and more people like to learn this trendy language so local languages can be in danger. Secondly, people who don't know the language and cannot learn it, feel not good and sometimes it can affect on the person's talent. Like, the person who the every skill, but if he does not know the English language he or she underestimated by other persons. To conclude, the vocabulary which binds the nature, and useful in many ways in trade and development of relationship of tourists and locals, it's advantages outweigh the disadvantages in my perception.
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language
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the benefits
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by the spread of English as a world
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will outweigh the drawbacks. I
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there are
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people
in every
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know English due to this tourist
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who
visit foreign
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country
they can communicate
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people
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who
want to study abroad can
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comfortably
. In this way,
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people
can connect with the foreigners and learn their culture and enhance their knowledge.

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help
in trade and business, English
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company
to grow the speed of work by outsourcing. In this situation, if the
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language
is same,
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so
we can do work faster and can
also
open beaches in the other
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countries
.
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local
tourism industry on which
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also
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helps
in the economic development of the nation.

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local
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languages
can
be disappeared
due to this step.
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more and more
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people
like to learn this trendy
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language
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local
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languages
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,
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who
don't know the
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language
and cannot learn it, feel not
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good
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sometimes
it can
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affect
on the person's talent. Like, the person
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who
the every
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skill
,
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if he does not know the English
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language
he or she underestimated by other persons.

To conclude
, the vocabulary which binds the nature, and useful in
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many
ways in trade and development of relationship of tourists and
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locals
, it's advantages outweigh the disadvantages in my perception.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay The advantages brought by the spread of English as a global language will outweigh the disadvantages. with this view? v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
287 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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