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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough time on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? v.12

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough time on learning practical skills. v. 12
Skills like debating and presentation have always been playing a vital role in this modern era and leading an active social life. Some people believe that these skills are to be developed at an early age as compared to building them in higher institutes. I completely agree with the stance and many plausible arguments support in favour of this view. To start with, interpersonal skills are an essential factor for maintaining a healthy lifestyle as these skills boost up the confidence and groom's one’s personality. It is important to learn such skills from an early age. Many scientific studies have proven that children learn faster as compared to an adult. Furthermore, skills developed at an early age are tending to have a long-lasting effect in future. For example, in the past few decades, various studies have been carried out on individuals of various age groups to determine the effectiveness of learning. The results have proved that growing age tend to have more grasping power in comparison to mature age. In addition to this, when a student starts pursuing his higher studies, he is involved in a lot of curriculums. So, acquiring interpersonal skills on beforehand would help them to concentrate on studies. Furthermore, debates and presentation skills would also create a pathway to achieve global opportunities. For instance, every college conducts debate competition and winner of such contest, then provided a chance to represent the country globally. To conclude, interpersonal skills, play an important role in academic as well as professional life. These skills not only help in creating a broader impression of learners’ character, but also benefit in social life. Hence, it is advantageous to have a command over them at an early age, which would benefit to the learner.
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as compared to building them in higher institutes. I completely
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with, interpersonal
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are an essential factor for maintaining a healthy lifestyle as these
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boost up the confidence and groom's one’s personality. It is
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important
to learn such
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skills
from an
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early
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age
.
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scientific
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studies
have proven that children learn faster as compared to an adult.
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,
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skills
developed at an
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early
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age
are tending to have a long-lasting effect
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.
For example
, in the past few decades, various
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have
been carried
out on individuals of various
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age
groups to determine the effectiveness of learning. The results have proved that growing
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age
tend to have more grasping power
in comparison
to mature age.

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to this, when a student
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pursuing his higher
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a lot of
curriculums.
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, acquiring interpersonal
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skills
on beforehand would
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them to concentrate on
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studies
.
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, debates and presentation
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skills
would
also
create a pathway to achieve global opportunities.
For instance
, every college conducts debate competition and winner of such contest, then provided a chance to represent the country globally.

To conclude
, interpersonal
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skills
, play an
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important
role in academic
as well
as professional life. These
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not
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help
in creating a broader impression of learners’ character,
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also
benefit in social life.
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, it is advantageous to have a command over them at an
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early
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age
, which would benefit to the learner.
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IELTS essay Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough time on learning practical skills. v. 12

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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