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Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages? v.11

Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages? v. 11
In academic institutions, education is provided to its students and they are tested on that knowledge on the basis of exams. I believe the system has its own merits, as it allows an institution to check and track the progress of a candidate. I strongly believe that this merit grading attribute aid to schooling welfare and has many positives than negatives To commence, the pros are as follows. Firstly, it is the key factor in motivating children to study, in order to achieve good grades. To illustrate, a large number of people graduating from school following grading system, on the basis of exams, shows higher knowledge and retention in subjects they were tested for. Secondly, it also promotes healthy competition in order for a person to become a better version of themselves, to exemplify, test provide a means for self assessment of a graduate in the field of study and understanding, competing with peers to be a better student help them to put hard work and dedication in their studies, resulting in an increase in knowledge and becoming better in their domain. However, sometimes these academic disciples feel a lot of stress, which can harm them cognitively. First of all, they may feel that they are not good enough and that can lead to emotional depression. For instance, if a student is not doing well in exams, they may start doubting their calibre and lose all self confidence, which in turn, can lead to academic downfall. Additionally, it may include feelings of jealousy and hatred for their peers if they are doing better in graded which may lead to emotional instability and malicious attitude. For example, The student may try to sabotage his peers in bringing their grades down, instead of working hard to do well in exams. To conclude, even though there are some negative impact of the examination method on a nation, I believe it is an effective way to assess performance and understanding and hence, the harmful impact it produces is insignificant when compared to the positive impact it brings to the system.
In academic institutions, education
is provided
to its
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students and
they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
on that knowledge on the basis of exams. I believe the system has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
merits, as it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
an institution to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
and
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track
the progress of a candidate. I
strongly
believe that this merit grading attribute aid to schooling welfare and has
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many
positives than negatives

To commence, the pros are as follows.
Firstly
, it is the key factor in motivating children to study, in order to achieve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
grades. To illustrate,
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a large number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
graduating from school following grading system, on the basis of exams,
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shows
higher knowledge and retention in subjects they were
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tested
for.
Secondly
, it
also
promotes healthy competition in order for a person to become a
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better
version of themselves, to exemplify,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
provide a means for self assessment of a graduate in the field of study and understanding, competing with peers to be a
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better
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them to put
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work and dedication in their studies, resulting in an increase in knowledge and becoming
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better
in their domain.

However
,
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sometimes
these academic disciples feel
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a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
, which can harm them
cognitively
.
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First of all
, they may feel that they are not
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good
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enough
and that can lead to emotional depression.
For instance
, if a
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student
is not
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doing well in exams
, they may
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start
doubting their
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calibre
and lose all
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self confidence
, which in turn, can lead to academic downfall.
Additionally
, it may include feelings of jealousy and hatred for their peers if they are doing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
in graded which may lead to emotional instability and malicious attitude.
For example
, The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
may try to sabotage his peers in bringing their grades down,
instead
of working
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
Use "well on" with "exams". Try this: "do well on exams".
do well in exams
.

To conclude
,
even though
there are
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some
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negative
impact of the examination method on a nation, I believe it is an effective way to assess performance and understanding and
hence
, the harmful impact it produces is insignificant when compared to the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
impact it brings to the system.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages? v. 11

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
346 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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