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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words v.56

Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? v. 56
These days it has been discerned that few people are convinced that ultimately important or semi-important works will have performed by the perspicacious machines. Subsequently the opinion that has risen for me has also confronted only negative aspects of the assertion put forward. In this essay we shall discuss about this one-sided thought in its detailed mannerism. Firstly, the dream of artificial intelligence is straight for various developed countries, but is of colossal nature. It says that the travelling of this project essentially depends upon various factors, which, although aligns money, resources, power, research, information meticulously, yet with all these variables there are certain non-materialistic threads of acceptability, adaptability, culture, language, governmental rules and religion, which has often found to play an immense character on declaring the prosperous existence of something. For example - Many villages in under-developed nations have not yet seen a constant supply of electricity or basic needs being satisfied, and therefore the idea on auto mobilization is rather critical. Moreover, even if it will have accomplished still the impression cannot be perceived as the last resort. It enunciates that the human has not cared to dwell permanently with anything in particular, but instead followed a magnificent passage of envisaging, innovating, experimenting and cultivating aspirations to keep the newness of life. For example – the utilization of the Internet has not only increased since 1990 but its controlled disposition has manifested, that people has aspired with notable ideas and far superior creativities solely on the basis of empirical knowledge and wisdom. So, on many occasions the determination of artificial intelligence has to withdraw its name as the radical attraction. Lastly, some people might be influenced with the regularity of outcomes acquired through the administration of sophisticated intelligence, yet in my opinion people will consecutively embed on to conceive that eventually all jobs will be rendered by automated bots.
These days it has
been discerned
that few
people
are convinced
that
ultimately
important
or semi-
important
works will have performed by the perspicacious machines.
Subsequently
the opinion that has risen for me has
also
confronted
only
negative
aspects of the assertion put forward. In this essay we shall
discuss about this
one-sided
thought
in its detailed mannerism.

Firstly
, the dream of artificial intelligence is straight for various
developed countries
,
but
is of colossal nature. It says that the travelling of this project
essentially
depends upon various factors, which, although aligns money, resources, power, research, information
meticulously
,
yet
with all these variables there are certain non-materialistic threads of acceptability, adaptability, culture, language, governmental
rules
and religion, which has
often
found to play an immense character on declaring the prosperous existence of something.
For example
-
Many
villages in under-developed nations have not
yet
seen
a constant supply of electricity or basic needs
being satisfied
, and
therefore
the
idea
on auto mobilization is
rather
critical.

Moreover
, even if it will have accomplished
still
the impression cannot
be perceived
as the last resort. It enunciates that the human has not cared to dwell
permanently
with anything
in particular
,
but
instead
followed a magnificent passage of envisaging, innovating, experimenting and cultivating aspirations to
keep
the newness of life.
For example
the utilization of the Internet has not
only
increased since 1990
but
its controlled disposition has manifested, that
people
has
aspired with notable
ideas
and far superior
creativities
solely
on the basis of empirical knowledge and wisdom.
So
, on
many
occasions the determination of artificial intelligence
has to
withdraw its name as the radical attraction.

Lastly
,
some
people
might
be influenced
with the regularity of outcomes acquired through the administration of sophisticated intelligence,
yet
in my opinion
people
will
consecutively
embed on to conceive that
eventually
all jobs will
be rendered
by automated bots.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? v. 56

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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