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Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.2

Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. with this statement? v. 2
It is argued that sometimes it is better to lie in order to be on the safe side. There are some occasions for sure, where a person is forced to tell lies, in order to save himself, but I do not agree with it completely. I believe truth prevails in the end, most of the times. I disagree slightly with this notion that telling the truth all the times is not essential. As they say truth prevails in the end. For example; A husband had many love affairs in the past. If he doesn't tell his wife about it, if his wife asks about it, it will create an environment of mistrust between the two. If the husband openly shares it with his wife, it will hurt the wife for the time being, but with time she will be encouraged by the fact that her husband does not hide things from her. It will strengthen their relation. Therefore, I will always prefer telling the truth all the times. In my opinion, there are some occasions where a person is forced to lie. I would agree a bit over here that sometimes it can help. I would still not prefer it though. For example; if a burglar tries to rob a house, where he asks the owner on gun point about hidden money, this is an occasion where he can lie to be on the safe side, because if he speaks the truth then all his hidden money will be gone. In conclusion, it is better to try to speak the truth almost everytime, but when it comes to humans safety, one is forced to lie on some occasions.
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is argued
that
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sometimes
it is better to
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lie
in order to be on the safe side. There are
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some
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occasions
for sure, where a person
is forced
to
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tell
lies, in order to save himself,
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but
I do not
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agree
with it completely. I believe
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truth
prevails in the
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end
,
Consider using "most of the time" if you mean "usually" or "very often".
most of the times
.

I disagree
slightly
with this notion that telling the
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truth
all the times is not essential.
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As
they say
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truth
prevails in the
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end
.
For example
; A husband had
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many
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love
affairs in the past. If he doesn't
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tell
his
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wife
about it, if his
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wife
asks about it, it will create an environment of mistrust between the two. If the husband
openly
shares it with his
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wife
, it will hurt the
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wife
for the time being,
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but
with time she will
be encouraged
by the fact that her husband does not
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hide
things from her. It will strengthen their relation.
Therefore
, I will always prefer telling the
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truth
all the times.

In my opinion, there are
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some
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occasions
where a person
is forced
to
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lie
. I would
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agree
a bit over here that
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sometimes
it can
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help
. I would
still
not prefer it though.
For example
; if a burglar tries to rob a
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house
, where he asks the owner on gun point about hidden money, this is an
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occasion
where he can
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lie
to be on the safe side,
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because
if he speaks the
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truth
then all his hidden money will
be gone
.

In conclusion
, it is better to try to speak the
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truth
almost
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everytime
,
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but
when it
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comes
to humans safety, one
is forced
to
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lie
on
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some
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occasions
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. with this statement? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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