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Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. v.1

Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. v. 1
It is true that telling the truth is always welcomed. However, some people believe that lying to others is needed in some cases. From my perspective, I completely agree with this opinion. It is widely acknowledged that conveying the true facts is more beneficial. One of the advantages of this is of the exemplary image built up for truth tellers, meaning a good example of being honest is provided for people to copy. In order to educate their kids, parents, for instance, make every single effort to set a good example by avoiding telling lies to their offspring. Another benefit is that truth tellers are less likely to be isolated or lonely as they can easily gain the sympathy, appreciation or even support from others when the truths are told. As the incident of Facebook's data privacy scandal, Mark, the CEO of the corporation, had to apologize to the public and were called for the testimony due to the action of hiding the fact that Facebook users' information is irresponsibly protected. On the other hand, telling lies is also acceptable from time to time, just for some special cases, though. This is only tolerable when someone is not telling the truth with a view to fostering belief or positive attitude for the other ones. As doctors, when they cannot bear seeing their patients losing hope of a cure, they have a sufficient right to become a liar so as to help create the positive thinking. In conclusion, I would argue that telling truth is a must, but lies are sometimes necessary for the way of living.
It is true that
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telling
the
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truth
is always welcomed.
However
,
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some
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people
believe that lying to others
is needed
in
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some
cases. From my perspective, I completely
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agree
with this opinion.

It is
widely
acknowledged that conveying the true facts is more beneficial. One of the advantages of this is of the exemplary image built up for
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truth
tellers, meaning a
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good
example of being honest
is provided
for
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people
to copy. In order to educate their kids, parents,
for instance
,
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make
every single effort to set a
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good
example by avoiding
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telling
lies to their offspring. Another benefit is that
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truth
tellers are less likely to
be isolated
or lonely as they can
easily
gain the sympathy, appreciation or even support from others when the
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truths
are
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told
. As the incident of Facebook's data privacy scandal, Mark, the CEO of the corporation, had to apologize to the public and
were called
for the testimony due to the action of hiding the fact that Facebook users' information is
irresponsibly
protected.

On the
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other
hand,
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telling
lies is
also
acceptable from time to time,
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just
for
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some
special cases, though. This is
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only
tolerable when someone is not
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telling
the
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truth
with a view to fostering belief or
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positive
attitude for the
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other
ones. As doctors, when they cannot bear seeing their patients losing hope of a cure, they have a sufficient right to become a liar
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so as to
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help
create the
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positive
thinking.

In conclusion
, I would argue that
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telling
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truth
is a
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must
,
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but
lies are
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sometimes
necessary for the way of living.
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13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Telling the truth at all times is not essential. On some occasions it is necessary to tell lies, and it is wrong to tell the truth. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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