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Teachers used to convey information, but now wide sources of information are available online. Some people think there is no role for teachers to play in modern education. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.1

Teachers used to convey information, but now wide sources of information are available online. Some people think there is no role for teachers to play in modern education. Others disagree. v. 1
Online shopping has both factor positive and negative, it's depend on person's think and person's choice. Recently online shopping is becoming most popular technology in this generation and because of that amazon and many other apps become more popular. In my opinion online shopping has many Serval things like if you don't have time for the shopping you can buy anything in just one click even if you want to buy vegetables you can buy easy in the cheapest rate. Now a days movie tickets are also available on the online app where you can check whether tickets are available or not. Let's talk about the disadvantages of online shopping if you want to buy things on app. You can also check the review and comments on the brand, but we don't know whether this review is absolutely correct or not. Second disadvantage or negative thing about this production is that is you don't know about the size of the device all companies have different size according to the material of the product for example, if you want to buy T-shirt and you wear XL size and you buy a XLt - shirt according to your body comfort, but when you get your delivery and you check buy wearing your clothes and you get a big T-shirt this is the big disadvantages of the online market. The conclusion is online shopping has both advantage and disadvantage. The advantage is that you can buy anything without going any shopping mall. You can save your time. Disadvantage of online shopping is you can see the commodity in your hand until you can buy this item
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has both factor
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positive
and
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negative
, it's depend on person's
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think
and person's choice.

Recently
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online
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shopping
is becoming most popular technology in this generation and
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because
of that
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amazon
and
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many
other apps become more popular.

In my opinion
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online
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shopping
has
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many
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Serval
things like if you don't have time for the
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shopping
you can
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buy
anything in
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just
one click even if you want to
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buy
vegetables you can
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easy in the cheapest rate.
Did you mean "nowadays"?
Now a days
movie tickets are
also
available on the
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online
app where you can
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check
whether tickets are available or not.

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Let
's talk about the disadvantages of
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online
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shopping
if you want to
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buy
things on app. You can
also
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check
the review and comments on the brand,
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but
we don't know whether this review is
absolutely
correct or not. Second
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disadvantage
or
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negative
thing about this production is
that is
you don't know about the size of the device all
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companies
have
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different
size according to the material of the product
for example
, if you want to
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buy
T-shirt and you wear XL size and you
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buy
a
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XLt
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-
shirt according to your body comfort,
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but
when you
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get
your delivery and you
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check
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buy
wearing your clothes and you
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get
a
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big
T-shirt this is the
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big
disadvantages of the
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online
market.

The conclusion is
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online
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shopping
has both advantage and
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disadvantage
. The advantage is that you can
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buy
anything without going any
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shopping
mall. You can save your time.
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Disadvantage
of
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online
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shopping
is you can
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see
the commodity in your hand until you can
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buy
this
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7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Teachers used to convey information, but now wide sources of information are available online. Some people think there is no role for teachers to play in modern education. Others disagree. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
272 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
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