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Task-2News stories on TV are in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your v.1

Task-2News stories on TV are in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? 1
In certain nations, second hand products are gaining more preference among individuals instead Of brand new products. This essay will, firstly, suggest the main cause for the increase in the demand of such goods is because they are available at cheaper price. Secondly, it will outline that by purchasing used goods is a positive development. The foremost cause for the increase in the acquisition of pre-owned goods rather than fresh-new goods because the latter is available at cheaper price. This is to say, people are able to get used products with the same features and quality than the brand new one and at a lower rate. Thus, they are able to save their money, which can be invested in different essential areas such as education and financial sectors. To elucidate, a recent study by The Time on March 2016 showed that more than 80 percent of people reported that they prefer to purchase second-hand products they get the same feature at less cost. This trend has a positive impact on the climate of the country. The sale and purchase of used goods help in reduction in the use of natural resources and environment degradation. This is to say, every manufacturing of products need the use non-renewable resources. With the purchase of used good the requirement of producing new goods is reduced in factories. Moreover, the release of toxic waste and chemicals generated at the time of production of goods in water bodies and land is also avoided. Thus, protecting the surroundings from pollution. To exemplify, a recent study in The New York Times showed that with the increase in the 60 percent supply of these products the environmental pollution is brought down from 30 percent. To conclude, People are more inclined to purchasing pre-used goods as they help in saving a lot of costs of people. This is beneficial for the habitat of the country as it helps to reduce the amount of pollution.
In certain nations, second hand
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products
are gaining more preference among individuals
instead


Of brand
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new
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products
. This essay will,
firstly
, suggest the main cause for the increase in the demand of such
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goods
is
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because
they are available at cheaper price.
Secondly
, it will outline that by purchasing
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used
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goods
is a
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positive
development.

The foremost cause for the increase in the acquisition of pre-
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owned
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goods
rather
than fresh-new
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goods
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because
the latter is available at cheaper price. This is to say,
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people
are able to
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get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
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products
with the same features and
Use "(quality)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
quality
than the brand
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new
one and at a lower rate.
Thus
, they are able to save their money, which can
be invested
in
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different
essential areas such as education and financial sectors. To elucidate, a recent study by The Time on March 2016
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showed
that more than 80 percent of
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people
reported that they prefer to
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purchase
second-hand
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products
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the same feature at less cost.

This trend has a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
impact on the climate of the country. The sale and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
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goods
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in reduction in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of natural resources and environment degradation. This is to say, every manufacturing of
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products
need the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
non-renewable resources. With the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
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good
the requirement of producing
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new
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goods
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
in factories.
Moreover
, the release of toxic waste and chemicals generated at the time of production of
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goods
in water bodies and land is
also
avoided.
Thus
, protecting the surroundings from pollution. To exemplify, a recent study in The
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New
York Times
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
that with the increase in the 60 percent supply of these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
the environmental pollution
is brought
down from 30 percent.

To conclude
,
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People
are more inclined to purchasing pre-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
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goods
as they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in saving
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a lot of
costs of
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people
. This is beneficial for the habitat of the country as it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the amount of pollution.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Task-2News stories on TV are in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
324 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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