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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about it? v.2

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about it? v. 2
It has been sought of a tradition from the media industry to include pictures or videos along with news stories. This essay will discuss different views regarding the importance of pictures to newspapers or TV articles. To begin with, the media industry have mastered the art of using captivating images of stories in order to grab the attention of their viewers or readers. This has proven to be a very efficient strategy in getting widespread coverage for news stories. For example, if there was a natural disaster like a volcanic eruption, that occurred in the coastal mountains of Canada, a picture of its occurrence in a story would grab the attention of most audience whether it be in a newspaper or TV. This is because they are able to visualize and summarize the entire story based on that picture. Secondly, as the popular saying goes "a picture tells a thousand words". A single image of a story's subject matter, either joyous or sorrowful, can have significant impact on viewers as stated initially. Moreover, some critics could also argue that the headline of a news story is more impactful than an image that depicts the exact same scenario. For example, a journalism school based in the UK ran a study some years ago that showed news headlines had the same impact as pictures on consumers. It was further stated that utilizing both headlines and images would increase the coverage of that story to its audiences. In conclusion, I agree that utilizing pictures in articles is very effective and most audience including myself would prefer to view a picture regarding a news story than read a thousand words.
It has
been sought
of a tradition from the media industry to include
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pictures
or videos along with
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news
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stories
. This essay will discuss
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different
views regarding the importance of
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pictures
to newspapers or TV articles.

To
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begin
with, the media industry have mastered the art of using captivating
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images
of
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stories
in order to grab the attention of their viewers or readers. This has proven to be a
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very
efficient strategy in getting widespread coverage for
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news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
.
For example
, if there was a natural disaster like a volcanic eruption, that occurred in the coastal mountains of Canada, a
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picture
of its occurrence in a
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story
would grab the attention of most audience whether it be in a newspaper or TV. This is
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because
they are able to visualize and summarize the entire
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story
based on that picture.

Secondly
, as the popular saying goes
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a
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picture
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tells
a thousand words
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"
. A single
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image
of a story's
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subject matter
, either joyous or sorrowful, can have significant impact on viewers as stated
initially
.
Moreover
,
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some
critics could
also
argue that the headline of a
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news
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story
is more impactful than an
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image
that depicts the exact same scenario.
For example
, a journalism school based in the UK ran a study
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some
years ago that
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showed
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news
headlines had the same impact as
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pictures
on consumers. It was
further
stated that utilizing both headlines and
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images
would increase the coverage of that
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story
to its audiences.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
that utilizing
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pictures
in articles is
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very
effective and most audience including myself would prefer to view a
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picture
regarding a
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news
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story
than read a thousand words.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about it? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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