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Task-2News stories on TV are in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your v.2

Task-2News stories on TV are in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? 2
Pictorial evidence and audiovisuals are usually a part of news found in the daily papers and on television news channels. A majority of the population believes that images are more impactful than just words. I strongly opine that visuals speak louder than words. In this essay, I shall discuss the merits of photographs and illustrations in the world of news. Firstly, Visuals play an important role in eliminating ambiguity and creating an efficient reach to its masses. News reporters often play short video clips or a series of images for a better perception of their viewers. For instance, broadcasting the Indian Air Force' s tribute on Independence Day is a visual treat. The marvels of the aircraft formations in the sky along with the fireworks, certainly cannot be understood without any photos or visual representation. Secondly, some local newspapers, resort to creating caricatures of famous politicians and personalities to make the news attractive. Comic strips and illustrations are observed to be appealing to the youth and hence the publishers use it to make millennial centric campaigns more effective. A typical example of this is active participation of the youngsters in voting and the right to freedom of speech. Lastly, illiterate persons can understand the pictorial representation of the news rather easily. A majority of the people are able to gauge the intensity of the situation through its visuals. Even historical events are recorded and referred to as important lessons for the human race. For example, pictorial evidence of a war zone or natural calamity-stricken area can help an individual estimate the graveness of the issue. In my view, an image is more stimulating to the brain as a person uses their imagination actively. News in the form of a sea of words or audio seems redundant and monotonous to people. This makes them lose their interest. To create an impactful awareness, news must carry imagery pertinent to its topic.
Pictorial evidence and audiovisuals are
usually
a part of
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news
found in the daily papers and on television
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news
channels. A majority of the population believes that images are more impactful than
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just
words. I
strongly
opine that
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visuals
speak louder than words. In this essay, I shall discuss the merits of photographs and illustrations in the world of news.

Firstly
,
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Visuals
play an
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important
role in eliminating ambiguity and creating an efficient reach to its masses.
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News
reporters
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often
play short video clips or a series of images for a better perception of their viewers.
For instance
, broadcasting the Indian Air
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Force&
#039; s tribute on Independence Day is a visual treat. The marvels of the aircraft formations in the sky along with the fireworks,
certainly
cannot
be understood
without any photos or visual representation.

Secondly
,
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some
local newspapers, resort to creating caricatures of
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famous
politicians and personalities to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
attractive. Comic strips and illustrations
are observed
to be appealing to the youth and
hence
the publishers
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use
it to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
millennial centric campaigns more effective. A typical example of this is active participation of the youngsters in voting and the right to freedom of speech.

Lastly
, illiterate persons can understand the pictorial representation of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
rather
easily
. A majority of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are able to gauge the intensity of the situation through its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visuals
. Even historical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
are recorded
and referred to as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
lessons for the human race.
For example
, pictorial evidence of a war zone or natural calamity-stricken area can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
an individual estimate the graveness of the issue.

In my view, an image is more stimulating to the brain as a person
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
their imagination
actively
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
News
in the form of a sea of words or audio seems redundant and monotonous to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
them lose their interest. To create an impactful awareness,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
carry imagery pertinent to its topic.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Task-2News stories on TV are in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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