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Task 2 Why is difficult for people to maintain a healthy diet? Causes? Solutions? v.1

Task 2 Why is difficult for people to maintain a healthy diet? Causes? Solutions? v. 1
Why is it difficult to create and maintain healthy eating habits? It seems that nowadays many people struggle in making healthy eating choices. This essay will discuss the main causes of this problem, which are the lack of time associated with the modern life and the costs of having a rich, varied and good diet. Additionally, this essay will discuss how an increase of our life organization and the evaluation of our priorities may help us to tackle this issue. Most people today have a busy schedule and, although, they perform an incredible number of tasks daily, there is limited time to think about eating healthy and many people argue that those choices are expensive and complicated, besides time-consuming. For example, in a lunchtime lasting less than one hour, going to the drive-thru of the fast food that will quickly deliver you a burger, fries and a soda is very efficient to save time and money, as these food networks usually offer good deals. That is why an extensive number of people make eating unhealthy cheap food a habit. On the other side, is not difficult to think about ways to change this situation. Firstly, everybody should organize better their life, so they will have time to stop and eat properly. Secondly, they need to priorize choices that will bring them long term benefits, besides the costs that it may have, the gain in health will problably outweight them. That includes eating vegetables, salads, fruits and avoiding fast food. After starting this process people might see that is not that hard or expensive to organize their time and choose to have a diet that is good for you. In conclusion, there is an increasing number of people that can not eat a healthy diet nowadays. This essay discussed the main causes of this issue and suggested that people should organize their schedules better, besides having budget priorities in order to maintain a good diet and benefit from it.
Why is it difficult to create and maintain
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healthy
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eating
habits?

It seems that nowadays
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many
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people
struggle in making
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healthy
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eating
choices. This essay will discuss the main causes of this problem, which are the lack of
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time
associated with the modern life and the costs of having a rich, varied and
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good
diet.
Additionally
, this essay will discuss how an increase of our life organization and the evaluation of our priorities may
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help
us to tackle this issue.

Most
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people
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today
have a busy schedule and, although, they perform an incredible number of tasks daily, there
is limited
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time
to
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think
about
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eating
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healthy
and
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many
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people
argue that those choices are expensive and complicated,
besides
time-consuming.
For example
, in a lunchtime lasting less than one hour, going to the drive-thru of the
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fast
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food
that will
quickly
deliver you a burger, fries and a soda is
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very
efficient to save
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time
and money, as these
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food
networks
usually
offer
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good
deals.
That is
why an extensive number of
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people
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make
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eating
unhealthy
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cheap
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food
a habit.

On the other side, is not difficult to
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think
about ways to
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change
this situation.
Firstly
, everybody should organize better their life,
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so
they will have
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time
to
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stop
and eat
properly
.
Secondly
, they need to
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priorize
choices that will bring them long term benefits,
besides
the costs that it may have, the gain in health will
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problably
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outweight
them. That includes
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eating
vegetables, salads, fruits and avoiding
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fast
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food
. After starting this process
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people
might
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see
that is
not that
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hard
or expensive to organize their
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time
and choose to have a diet
that is
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good
for you.

In conclusion
, there is an increasing number of
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people
that can not eat a
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healthy
diet nowadays. This essay discussed the main causes of this issue and suggested that
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people
should organize their schedules better,
besides
having budget priorities in order to maintain a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
diet and benefit from it.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS essay Task 2 Why is difficult for people to maintain a healthy diet? Causes? Solutions? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
328 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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