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Task 2: Increase of the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? v.2

Task 2: Increase of the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 2
It is argued that higher petrol price is the best methods to prevent developing traffic and environmental pollution. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement, and this essay will give some other ways which can improve this these problems. The price of petrol going upwards does not bring lots of benefits for people and the environment, due to reasons. Firstly, increasing the price of petrol is not good the best way because this solution would happen several social disagreements. For instance, raising petrol cost affects financial families. Secondly, if higher petrol costs increase, this will make higher expenditure transportation of products. Obviously, goods usually are transported by cars; therefore, it uses the largest amount of petrol. To illustrate, citizens have to buy food such as meat, vegetable and so on with higher costs than because of increasing petrol costs. There are various measures can solve traffic status and pollution problems rather than the rising cost of petrol. To begin with, the government plays a vital role in protecting the environment and reducing private vehicles. For example, the administration should encourage inhabitant use public transport as bus, electrical car and bicycle. Finally, advertisement campaigns also are one effective way, and it persuades people to prevent the environmental pollution. For instance, these campaigns contain a great deal of useful information which help people to see the importance of using public transport. In conclusion, high petrol prices bring some disadvantages such as affecting financial and making price of goods also increase. Besides, the government and media can change the way of rising petrol costs is that encourage people to use public transport.
It
is argued
that higher
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petrol
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price
is the best methods to
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prevent
developing traffic and environmental pollution. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement, and this essay will give
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some
other ways which can
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improve
this these problems.

The
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price
of
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petrol
going upwards does not bring lots of benefits for
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people
and the environment, due to reasons.
Firstly
, increasing the
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price
of
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petrol
is not
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good
the best way
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because
this solution would happen several social disagreements.
For instance
, raising
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petrol
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cost
affects financial families.
Secondly
, if higher
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petrol
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costs
increase, this will
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make
higher expenditure transportation of products.
Obviously
,
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goods
usually
are transported
by cars;
therefore
, it
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uses
the largest amount of
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petrol
. To illustrate, citizens
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have to
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buy
food such as meat, vegetable and
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so
on with higher
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costs
than
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because
of increasing
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petrol
costs.

There are various measures can solve traffic status and pollution problems
rather
than the rising
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cost
of
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petrol
. To
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begin
with, the
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government
plays a vital role in protecting the environment and reducing private vehicles.
For example
, the administration should encourage inhabitant
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use
public transport as bus, electrical car and bicycle.
Finally
, advertisement campaigns
also
are one effective way, and it persuades
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people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
the environmental pollution.
For instance
, these campaigns contain a great deal of useful information which
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help
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people
to
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see
the importance of using public transport.

In conclusion
, high
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petrol
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prices
bring
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some
disadvantages such as affecting financial and making
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price
of
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goods
also
increase.
Besides
, the
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government
and media can
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change
the way of rising
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petrol
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costs
is that encourage
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people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
public transport.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Task 2: Increase of the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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