Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. v.3

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 3
In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of cars, resulting in traffic jams and pollution. It is believed that this problem can be solved by increasing petrol price, but I strongly disgaree. There are far better solutions to this problem. Petrol is one of the necessity in the modern world and increasing the price will have adverse effects. Firstly, higher fuel prices will increase inflation and put burden on everyone, including the poor people. Moreover, increasing fuel cost will raise public transport fares which will decrease the popularity of this facility. For example, if bus ticket fares are high, people will avoid using them. Thirdly, petrol prices will also negatively effect people such as farmers, who use fuel in tractors and other machinery, but do not use it in cars. Such people should not be affected since they are not contributors to the traffic problems. Fortunately, there are ways we can solve the growing traffic problem. One necessary measure is to improve public transport such as buses and trains. If their coverage and schedule is improved, people will prefer to use these services intead of the personal cars. Furthermore, promoting cycling can significantly improve the air quality and congestion on the roads. Also, creating awareness among people regarding the ride sharing benefits can provide some relief from traffic problems. For instance, if four people travel in the same car instead of separate cars, this can decrease the number of vehicles on the road, and hence reduce pollution. In conclusion, increasing the fuel price is not the effective solution to control traffic problem in my opinion. Investing on improving public transport and creating awareness regarding the benefits of cycling will yield better results.
In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
, resulting in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
traffic
jams and pollution. It
is believed
that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
can
be solved
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increasing
petrol
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I
strongly
Possible spelling mistake found.
disgaree
. There are far better solutions to this problem.

Petrol is one of the necessity in the modern world and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increasing
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
will have adverse effects.
Firstly
, higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
will increase inflation and put burden on everyone, including the poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
Moreover
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increasing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
cost will raise public transport fares which will decrease the popularity of this facility.
For example
, if bus ticket fares are high,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will avoid using them.
Thirdly
, petrol
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
will
also
negatively
effect
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
such as farmers, who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
in tractors and other machinery,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
. Such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should not be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
since they are not contributors to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
traffic
problems.

Fortunately
, there are ways we can solve the growing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
traffic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
. One necessary measure is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
public transport such as buses and trains. If their coverage and schedule is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
these services
Possible spelling mistake found.
intead
of the personal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
.
Furthermore
, promoting cycling can
significantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the air quality and congestion on the roads.
Also
, creating awareness among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
regarding the ride sharing benefits can provide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
relief from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
traffic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
.
For instance
, if four
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
travel in the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
instead
of separate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
, this can decrease the number of vehicles on the road, and
hence
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
pollution.

In conclusion
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increasing
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
is not the effective solution to control
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
traffic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
in my opinion. Investing on improving public transport and creating awareness regarding the benefits of cycling will yield better results.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts