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Talk about your country’s national anthem or flag. Describe it, then say, where it is used and where it can be found today? Include details and examples to support your response. v.1

Talk about your country’s national anthem or flag. Describe it, then say, where it is used and where it can be found today? Include details and examples to support your response. v. 1
Shopping is the necessity of the life is debated in popular media across the globe. It is often argued by some that online shopping saves precious time. Meanwhile, the other still claims that shopping from physical located stores to experience the physical appearance of the product. However, I believe that buying from physical stores or online both can be beneficial. This essay will explore both sides of the argument before discussing my opinion. On the one hand, the supporters of the idea that shopping from online platforms are beneficial because it saves time. As an online platform offers a wider range of inventory in a matter of few clicks makes customer to buy essential items in a matter of seconds. Take an example of the United Kingdom, by 2025, the online shopping takes the edge on any other platform because of emerging technology. Thus, online buying saves time rapidly increasing as well as. While on the other hand, the advocates of the view that shopping from conventional store is extremely beneficial due to product physical appearance. As in physical located stores, customers get to know the proper description through salesman also people can hold the product in their hand. Take an example of Southern California, where a report by Ministry of commerce clearly shows that people are happier to buy products by its physical appearance. Hence, the physical shopping gives the customer to experience the product. Whereas, I believe that online shopping and shopping from physical located stores both are beneficial because they saves precious time and gives customer physical appearance of the product as well as. To sum up, online shopping is emerging technology while conventional shopping gives customer great approach to the product.
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argued by
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online
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. Meanwhile, the other
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shopping
from
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physical
located
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stores
to experience the
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physical
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appearance
of the
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product
.
However
, I believe that buying from
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physical
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or
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online
both can be
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beneficial
. This essay will explore both sides of the argument
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discussing my opinion.

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that
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from
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platforms are
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beneficial
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it
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saves
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.
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an
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platform offers a wider range of inventory in a matter of few clicks
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makes
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customer
to
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buy
essential items in a matter of seconds. Take an example of the United Kingdom, by 2025, the
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online
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shopping
takes the edge on any other platform
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because
of emerging technology.
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,
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online
buying
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rapidly
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as well
as.

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, the advocates of the view that
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from conventional
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store
is
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beneficial
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product
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physical
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appearance
. As in
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physical
located
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,
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customers
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get
to know the proper description through salesman
also
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people
can hold the
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product
in their hand. Take an example of Southern California, where a report by Ministry of commerce
clearly
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people
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.
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, the
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physical
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shopping
gives the
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customer
to experience the product.

Whereas, I believe that
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online
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and
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from
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physical
located
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stores
both are
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beneficial
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they
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saves
precious
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time
and gives
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customer
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physical
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appearance
of the
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product
as well
as.

To sum up,
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online
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is emerging technology while conventional
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shopping
gives
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customer
great approach to the
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product
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Talk about your country’s national anthem or flag. Describe it, then say, where it is used and where it can be found today? Include details and examples to support your response. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
285 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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