Talk about an important letter that you have sent to someone. Please say- Why did you send it? - What was it about? - To whom did you send it? v.1
Talk about an important letter that you have sent to someone. Please say- Why did you send it? - What was it about? - To whom did you send it? v. 1
We have seen a rising number of start- ups in the last decade. The Silicon Valley in California is the paradise for entrepreneurs who would like to start their own business. They choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. But what are the reasons for this and what could be the disadvantages of self-employment?
To begin, people want to be more independent and they would like to choose their working hours. Of course, this is impossible if you are part of a company. However, home offices are very popular nowadays, but shift workers, for instance, cannot do your job at home, nor can they decide anything about their timetable. Consequently, people quit their job and become self-employed.
Secondly, workers have to obey orders, no matter if it is a wrong or correct decision. Furthermore, people want to be their own leader and they choose the leave the company and start their own business.
On the other hand, if you work on your own, you have to take care whether you have enough work to do.
You are responsible for your company`s finances. As an employee of an organization, for example, you do not have to be concerned about this. The salary is transferred to your bank account at the end of the month without any necessary action.
In conclusion, people often think it is very easy and not a big deal to become self-employed, but there come many other tasks and responsibilities with this decision.
We have
seen
a rising number of
start
- ups in the last decade. The Silicon Valley in California is the paradise for entrepreneurs who would like to
start
their
own
business. They choose to be self-employed
rather
than to work for a
company
or organization.
But
what are the reasons for this and what could be the disadvantages of self-employment?
To
begin
,
people
want to be more
independent and
they would like to choose their working hours.
Of course
, this is impossible if you are part of a
company
.
However
, home offices are
very
popular nowadays,
but
shift workers,
for instance
, cannot do your job at home, nor can they decide anything about their timetable.
Consequently
,
people
quit their job and become self-employed.
Secondly
, workers
have to
obey orders, no matter if it is a
wrong
or correct decision.
Furthermore
,
people
want to be their
own
leader and
they choose the
leave
the
company
and
start
their
own
business.
On the other hand
, if you work on your
own
, you
have to
take care whether you have
enough
work to do.
You are responsible for your
company`s
finances. As an employee of an organization,
for example
, you do not
have to
be concerned
about this. The salary
is transferred
to your bank account at the
end
of the month without any necessary action.
In conclusion
,
people
often
think
it is
very
easy and not a
big
deal to become self-employed,
but
there
come
many
other tasks and responsibilities with this decision.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes