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talk about an event from the past that you would like to relive. describe the original event and say why you would lie to relive v.1

talk about an event from the past that you would like to relive. describe the original event and say why you would lie to relive v. 1
Whether to learn mathematics or not has always been debatable. Some parents think that mathematics is no longer needed in the curriculum of the school, while others think that it is an important subject and should be taught. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth. A lot of parents are of the view that mathematics should be removed as a core subject because it has become unimportant. In today's world, mostly all the complex human things have been taken by computer operations. For instance, a person wants to do a small subtraction or a big multiplication, all these things can be done without any problem on computers. So it has become very convenient for the humans. All in all, parents have strong reasons to believe that study mathematics in school is of no importance. In contrast, there are many other people who strongly oppose the statement and think that mathematics is a very fundamental subject. In fact, in day to day life, we all need the mathematical skills in everything. For instance, If a person wants to go for window shopping or doing tough calculations that can be done on a phone, are essential daily skills, he needs mathematical skills to calculate it. For these reasons, parents have strong points to think that mathematics should be taught in schools. To conclude, this essay has discussed various points which show the significance of learning mathematics in school and the also the negative aspect of learning it, which other parents think about it.
Whether to learn
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mathematics
or not has always been debatable.
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Some
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parents
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think
that
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mathematics
is no longer needed in the curriculum of the school, while others
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think
that it is an
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important
subject and should
be taught
. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth.

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A lot of
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parents
are of the view that
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mathematics
should
be removed
as a core subject
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because
it has become unimportant. In
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today
's world,
mostly
all the complex human things have
been taken
by computer operations.
For instance
, a person wants to do a
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small
subtraction or a
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big
multiplication, all these things can
be done
without any problem on computers.
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So
it has become
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very
convenient for the humans. All in all,
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parents
have strong reasons to believe that study
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mathematics
in school is of no importance.

In contrast
, there are
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many
other
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people
who
strongly
oppose the statement and
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think
that
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mathematics
is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
fundamental subject. In fact, in day to day life, we all need the mathematical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in everything.
For instance
, If a person wants to go for window shopping or doing tough calculations that can
be done
on a phone, are essential daily
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skills
, he needs mathematical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to calculate it. For these reasons,
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parents
have strong points to
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think
that
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mathematics
should
be taught
in schools.

To conclude
, this essay has discussed various points which
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show
the significance of learning
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mathematics
in school and the
also
the
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negative
aspect of learning it, which other
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parents
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think
about it.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay talk about an event from the past that you would like to relive. describe the original event and say why you would lie to relive v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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