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Talk about an enjoyable or memorable experience that you had when you were alone. Explain what made this event so memorable. v.1

Talk about an enjoyable or memorable experience that you had when you were alone. Explain what made this event so memorable. v. 1
Education is very essential for the students and the country as well. While many people believe that the tutors are the major reason for the best results in their education, many still believe that it actually depends upon that particular student. This essay will discuss why the attitude of a student is needed, but why teachers are the main key in the student`s life. Point of view of a student is certainly an essential aspect to achieve high scores in his/her field easily. If the scholar has an interest in his subject, then with the least effort he or she can perform so well in education. For example, If a student whose favourite subject is mathematics, and if you tell him to study biology, then the outcome of that would be worse. Having an interest in education is vital to acquire the desired score. Despite having an interest, any pupil without a guide, the interest is futile. Teachers can provide basic knowledge, which is so crucial to initiate any subject. For example, To build a building, it`s base must have to be robust enough to handle the weight of the whole building. Anything in this world needs guidance no matter how much talent or capability it has. So having an educator is an important thing. In conclusion, this essay discussed why attitude of a student matters a lot, but why teachers are the main dominators in his life. In my opinion, having a guru is vitally important for any particular pupil, who will show him the right path and give guidance in any situation in his educational life.
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Education
is
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very
essential for the
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students
and the country
as well
. While
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many
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people
believe that the tutors are the major reason for the best results in their
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education
,
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many
still
believe that it actually depends upon that particular
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student
. This essay will discuss why the attitude of a
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student
is needed
,
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but
why teachers are the main key in the
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student`s
life.

Point of view of a
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student
is
certainly
an essential aspect to achieve high scores in his/her field
easily
. If the scholar has an
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interest
in his subject, then with the least effort he or she can perform
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so
well in
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education
.
For example
, If a
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student
whose
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favourite
subject is mathematics, and if you
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tell
him to study biology, then the outcome of that would be worse.
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Having
an
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interest
in
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education
is vital to acquire the desired score.

Despite
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having
an
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interest
, any pupil without a guide, the
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interest
is futile. Teachers can provide basic knowledge, which is
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so
crucial to initiate any subject.
For example
, To build a building,
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it`s
base
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must
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have to
be robust
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enough
to handle the weight of the whole building. Anything in this world needs guidance no matter how much talent or capability it has.
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So
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having
an educator is an
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important
thing.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed why attitude of a
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student
matters a lot,
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but
why teachers are the main dominators in his life. In my opinion,
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having
a guru is
vitally
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important
for any particular pupil, who will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
him the right path and give guidance in any situation in his educational life.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Talk about an enjoyable or memorable experience that you had when you were alone. Explain what made this event so memorable. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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