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Talk about a wedding you have recently attended. Please say- Whose wedding was it? - What did you do there? - What was so special about this event that made you remember it? Discussion- Should weddings be kept small and humble, or big and fancy? - Why do peo v.1

Talk about a wedding you have recently attended. Please say- Whose wedding was it? - What did you do there? - What was so special about this event that made you remember it? Discussion- Should weddings be kept small and humble, or big and fancy? - Why do peo v. 1
In today's world, waste management has become a top priority in many countries. One popular approach adopted by some of the local communities is the recycling of waste produced from homes. However, the success rate of this approach is said to have not been efficient enough and seeks the interference of the government for the same. In my opinion, I agree that the waste can be best handled with strict proposals and actions instructed from the government's end. Firstly, I believe mandatory rules such as segregation of waste at the grass-root level is the basic criteria for managing and recycling waste. In other words, every neighbourhood should be made aware of the products that can be recycled and how they can be segregated. One example is how the Bangalore Municipal Authority has imposed a compulsion of distinguishing wet waste and dry waste. This helps in making the first process of recycling easy from the very place it is generated. Secondly, another point to be considered is the compulsory adoption of waste management pits in every household to use the green waste produced in their kitchen. The dry waste can be collected by the local body, while the wet waste generated from cooking should be recycled within the same compound either by converting it into cooking gas or as manure for gardening. For instance, townships and apartments should construct a waste recycling pit to make sure that the cooking waste is efficiently recycled and utilised within its boundary. This helps in minimising the amount of waste that goes out of every habitat. In conclusion, though mechanisms to utilise waste is being slowly cultivated within some dwellings, I think the involvement of the government in terms of strict mandatory rules and regulations will further enhance the level of recycling waste at all the residences.
In
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today
's world,
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waste
management has become a top priority in
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many
countries. One popular approach adopted by
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some of the
local communities is the
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recycling
of
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waste
produced from homes.
However
, the success rate of this approach
is said
to have not been efficient
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enough
and seeks the interference of the
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government
for the same. In my opinion, I
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agree
that the
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waste
can be best handled with strict proposals and actions instructed from the
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government
's
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end
.

Firstly
, I believe mandatory
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rules
such as segregation of
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waste
at the grass-root level is the basic criteria for managing and
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recycling
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waste
.
In other words
, every
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neighbourhood
should
be made
aware of the products that can
be recycled
and how they can
be segregated
. One example is how the Bangalore Municipal Authority has imposed a compulsion of distinguishing wet
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waste
and dry
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waste
. This
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helps
in making the
first
process of
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recycling
easy from the
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very
place it
is generated
.

Secondly
, another point to
be considered
is the compulsory adoption of
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waste
management pits in every household to
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use
the green
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waste
produced in their kitchen. The dry
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waste
can
be collected
by the local body, while the wet
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waste
generated from cooking should
be recycled
within the same compound either by converting it into cooking gas or as manure for gardening.
For instance
, townships and apartments should construct a
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waste
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recycling
pit to
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make
sure that the cooking
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waste
is
efficiently
recycled and
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utilised
within its boundary. This
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helps
in
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minimising
the amount of
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waste
that goes out of every habitat.

In conclusion
, though mechanisms to
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utilise
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waste
is being
slowly
cultivated within
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some
dwellings, I
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think
the involvement of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
in terms of strict mandatory
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations will
further
enhance the level of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
at all the residences.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS essay Talk about a wedding you have recently attended. Please say- Whose wedding was it? - What did you do there? - What was so special about this event that made you remember it? Discussion- Should weddings be kept small and humble, or big and fancy? - Why do peo v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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