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Describe a teacher from your past that you remember. You should say: What class the teacher taught you and how old you were. What the teacher's special qualities and characteristics were. Why you remember this teacher. v.2

Describe a teacher from your past that you remember. You should say: What class the teacher taught you and how old you were. What the teacher's special qualities and characteristics were. Why you remember this teacher. v. 2
A society with a democratic style of leadership allows her citizens to freely express themselves without any form of hinderance. While some people view freedom of speech as unnecessary, I agree that the opinions of the nation’s citizens are very paramount. Firstly, when people in the country express their views without prohibition, it puts the leadership of the government in check. In the long run, it will be very beneficial to the government because her citizens can always speak up when they are not satisfied if they derail. In addition, the plan of every nation’s government is to please her citizens and make the country habitable for daily living. To illustrate this point, the citizens of the United States of America in 2013 expressed their dissatisfaction through the various social media platforms over the 80% tax increase in the nation. It was review and immediately reduce to 30%. Therefore, a country that allows her citizens to give their opinions become and envy to others. Another point to consider is that freedom of speech of the citizens in a free society gives them the right to elect their leaders and also impeach them whenever they default. Also, their voices are not silenced whenever the elections were not conducted fairly and freely. They do not need to be bullied, arrested and killed due to airing their views. Likewise, people have the right to impeach the nation’s leader and re-elect a new one without any form of oppression. For example, the current president of Nigeria has been impeached due to some misappropriation of funds and irregularities of decision. Although, he presently facing some trials in the court, the decision is subject to the opinions of the judge and her citizens. In conclusion, freedom of speech is very important and I agree because it puts the government in check and allows them to elect their leaders.
A society with a democratic style of leadership
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allows
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citizens
to
freely
express themselves without any form of
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hinderance
. While
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some
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people
view freedom of speech as unnecessary, I
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agree
that the opinions of the
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nation’s
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citizens
are
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very
paramount.

Firstly
, when
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people
in the country express their views without prohibition, it puts the leadership of the
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government
in
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check
. In the long run, it will be
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very
beneficial to the
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government
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because
her
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citizens
can always speak up when they are not satisfied if they derail.
In addition
, the plan of every
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nation’s
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government
is to
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please
her
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citizens
and
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make
the country habitable for daily living. To illustrate this point, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
citizens
of the United States of America in 2013 expressed their dissatisfaction through the various social media platforms over the 80% tax increase in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nation
. It was review and immediately
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
to 30%.
Therefore
, a country that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
her
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citizens
to give their opinions become and envy to others.

Another point to consider is that freedom of speech of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
citizens
in a free society gives them the right to elect their leaders and
also
impeach them whenever they default.
Also
, their voices are not silenced whenever the elections were not conducted
fairly
and
freely
. They do not need to
be bullied
, arrested and killed due to airing their views.
Likewise
,
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people
have the right to impeach the
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nation’s
leader and re-elect a new one without any form of oppression.
For example
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
president of Nigeria has
been impeached
due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
misappropriation of funds and irregularities of decision. Although, he
presently
facing
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some
trials in the court, the decision is subject to the opinions of the judge and her citizens.

In conclusion
, freedom of speech is
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very
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important
and I
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agree
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because
it puts the
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government
in
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check
and
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allows
them to elect their leaders.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Describe a teacher from your past that you remember. You should say: What class the teacher taught you and how old you were. What the teacher's special qualities and characteristics were. Why you remember this teacher. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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