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Talk about a situation where you have got an advice from somebody. Please say- Who gave it to you? - What was the advice? - What impact did it leave on you or your life? v.1

Talk about a situation where you have got an advice from somebody. Please say- Who gave it to you? - What was the advice? - What impact did it leave on you or your life? v. 1
For some time now, almost all the companies and organizations have made it a mandate for their employees to wear uniform in the workplace. This essay will throw light on both the advantages and disadvantages of wearing the uniform at work. Wearing a business uniform gives the worker an overall professional look. It instills a sense of confidence in himself. For instance, if an IT employee wears an attire decided upon by the organization, it bolsters him to be more productive when working with other professional people around. In addition to this, it gives a direct impression on any outsider, about the discipline and the work culture of the organization. For example, if a client of a firm visits the former's office and sees all the staff around wearing the same apparel, the latter can draw a clear picture in his mind about the level of professionalism and the institution's commitment towards work. It is for these reasons why companies feel beneficial to make wearing a garb an imperative. Although there are majority of the benefits of making dress code a necessity, its drawbacks cannot be denied. Firstly, an employee can feel bored with following the prosaic routine of wearing the same attire every single day. This can not only hamper his mood, but also his productivity in the work can be affected. To exemplify, when an insurance worker is made to wear a particular apparel, it may turn out that he may not be in a mood to do his task with joy. Furthermore, most workers can face comfort issues when it comes to wearing a professional dress. People have different comforts acording to the type of costume they are wearing. To illustrate, an employee wearing a trouser of a certain waist length may not feel the same level of comfort as compared to when he wears a pair of jeans of the same measurements. Hence, there are deficits, although negligible, of necessitating the employees to wear a particular type of costume. To sum up, institutions today are increasingly encouraging their employees to follow a strict routine of wearing a professional gear to the office everyday without fail. This essay discussed both the positive and the negative aspects of the same.
For
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time
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now
, almost all the
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companies
and organizations have made it a mandate for their
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employees
to
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wear
uniform in the workplace. This essay will throw light on both the advantages and disadvantages of wearing the uniform at work.

Wearing a business uniform gives the worker an
overall
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professional
look. It instills a sense of confidence in himself.
For instance
, if an IT
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employee
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wears
an attire decided upon by the organization, it bolsters him to be more productive when working with other
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professional
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people
around.
In addition
to this, it gives a direct impression on any outsider, about the discipline and the work culture of the organization.
For example
, if a client of a firm visits the former's office and
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sees
all the staff around wearing the same apparel, the latter can draw a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
picture in his mind about the level of professionalism and the institution's commitment towards work. It is for these reasons why
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companies
feel beneficial to
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make
wearing a garb an imperative.

Although there are
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majority of
the benefits of making dress code a necessity, its drawbacks cannot
be denied
.
Firstly
, an
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employee
can feel bored with following the prosaic routine of wearing the same attire every single day. This can not
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only
hamper his mood,
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but
also
his productivity in the work can be
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affected
. To exemplify, when an insurance worker
is made
to
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wear
a particular apparel, it may turn out that he may not be in a mood to do his task with joy.
Furthermore
, most workers can face comfort issues when it
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comes
to wearing a
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professional
dress.
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People
have
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different
comforts
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acording
to the type of costume they are wearing. To illustrate, an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employee
wearing a trouser of a certain waist length may not feel the same level of comfort as compared to when he
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wears
a pair of jeans of the same measurements.
Hence
, there are deficits, although negligible, of necessitating the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wear
a particular type of costume.

To sum up, institutions
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today
are
increasingly
encouraging their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
employees
to follow a strict routine of wearing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
professional
gear to the office
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
without fail. This essay discussed both the
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positive
and the
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negative
aspects of the same.
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IELTS essay Talk about a situation where you have got an advice from somebody. Please say- Who gave it to you? - What was the advice? - What impact did it leave on you or your life? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
372 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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