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Describe a situation (or time) when you received some useful advice. What the situation wasWho gave you the adviceWhat the advice wasExplain how this advice was useful to you. v.1

Describe a situation (or time) when you received some useful advice. What the situation wasWho gave you the adviceWhat the advice wasExplain how this advice was useful to you. v. 1
HOW MUCH TAX SHOULD BE COLLECTED IT THE BUGGEST DISCUSSED TOPIC NOWADAYS IN EACH AND EVERY COUNTRY. CERATIN FOLKS ARGUE THAT WHAT EVER SALARY WE OWNED THAT IS OUR PROPERTY, AND INDIVIDUAL ONLY HAS RIGHT TO KEEP THAT WITH HIM RATHER THAN PAYING BACK TO THE REGIME IN THE FORM OF TAX. FISRTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY CERTAIN PEOPLE DO NOT WANT TO REMUNERATION TAX AND SECONDLY, HOW PAYING TAX ON TIME WOULD CONTRIBUTE TO MAKE OUR TERRITORY'S ECONOMY STRONGER. LASTLY, THE FOLLOWING ESSAY WILL TOTALLY OPPOSE AND SUPPORT IN THE FAVOR OF PAYING TAX AS RESPONSIBLE CIVILIAN. ON THE ONE HAND, HARD WORK OF FOLKS MAKE THEM FEEL BAD WHEN THEY HAVE TO GIVE SOME OF THE MONEY FROM THEIR SALARY TO THE TERRITTORY. THEY THINK IT IS A RESULT OF THEIR DEDICATION, PASSION AND SLEEPLESS NIGHTS. IF THEY REIMBURSEMENT TAX THEN THEY UNABLE TO FULLY SUPPORT THEIR FAMILY FINANCIALLY. HENCE, THEY DO NOT LIKE REIMBURSEMENT TAXEX TO THE AUTHORITY. HOWEVER, THIS MIGHT AFFECT THE GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT OF THE GOVERNMENT. FOR EXAMPLE, AS PER THE CANADIAN GOVERNMENT RULE, EVERYONE HAS TO REIMBURSEMENT 14% OF THEIR SALARY WHICH IS NOT SUFFICIENT FOR THE PERSON TO SURVIVE WITH THE INCREADED INFLATION. ON THE OTHER SIDE, THE PRIME REASON BEHIND PAYING TAX IS THE REVOLUTION OF THE COUNTRY IN VARIOUS FIELD AS THE AUTHORITY USED TO HAVE ENOUGH MONEY TO BRING SOME CHANGES IN THE NATION. SO WHEN WE PAY MONEU TO THE REGIME, THEY RARE ABLE TO COOPERATE WITH EVOLUTION OF THE NATION. FOR INSTANCE, AS PER THE INDIAN GOVERNMENT RULE, WHEN WE REMUNERATION FULL TAX THEN THE IMPOVERISHED PEOPLE ARE ABLE TO GET HELP IN SEVERAL SECTORS LIKE FOR STUDIES, MEDICAL TREATEMENT AND SO ON. THIS IS POSSIBLE BECAUSE 70% OF THE INDIAN CITIZENS PAY TAXEX ON TIME. THUS, THE INDIA IS NOW CONSIDERED AS DEVELOPED AND EDUCATED NATION AROUND THE GLOBE. IN CONCLUSION, TAX INDEED HELP EVERYONE IN SOME OF THE WAY. HOWEVER, IS IS IMMPOSIBLE FOR SOME LPWER CLASS FAMILY TO PAY TAX, SO I BELIEVE, THERE SHOULD BE SOME RUL WHERE THEY HAVE OPTION TO SELECTED HOPW MUCH THEY WANT TO PAY BACK TO THE REGIME AS PER THEIR FINANCIAL ABILITY. THIS WAY, MAY BE 905 CIVILIAN AGREE TO PAY THE TAX WITHOUT ANY HESSITATION.
HOW MUCH
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TAX
SHOULD
BE COLLECTED
IT THE
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BUGGEST
DISCUSSED TOPIC NOWADAYS IN EACH AND EVERY COUNTRY.
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CERATIN
FOLKS ARGUE THAT WHAT EVER SALARY WE
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OWNED
THAT IS
OUR PROPERTY, AND INDIVIDUAL
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ONLY
HAS RIGHT TO
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KEEP
THAT WITH HIM
RATHER
THAN
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PAYING
BACK TO THE REGIME IN THE FORM OF
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TAX
.
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FISRTLY
, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY CERTAIN
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PEOPLE
DO NOT WANT TO REMUNERATION
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TAX
AND
SECONDLY
, HOW
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PAYING
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TAX
ON TIME WOULD CONTRIBUTE TO
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MAKE
OUR TERRITORY'S ECONOMY STRONGER.
LASTLY
, THE FOLLOWING ESSAY WILL
TOTALLY
OPPOSE AND SUPPORT IN THE FAVOR OF
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PAYING
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TAX
AS RESPONSIBLE CIVILIAN.

ON THE ONE HAND,
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HARD
WORK OF FOLKS
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MAKE
THEM FEEL
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BAD
WHEN THEY
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HAVE TO
GIVE
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SOME OF THE
MONEY FROM THEIR SALARY TO THE
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TERRITTORY
. THEY
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THINK
IT IS A RESULT OF THEIR DEDICATION, PASSION AND SLEEPLESS NIGHTS. IF
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THEY REIMBURSEMENT
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TAX
THEN
Did you mean "THEY are" or "THEY were"?
THEY
UNABLE TO
FULLY
SUPPORT THEIR FAMILY
FINANCIALLY
.
HENCE
, THEY DO NOT LIKE REIMBURSEMENT
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TAXEX
TO THE AUTHORITY.
HOWEVER
, THIS MIGHT AFFECT THE GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT OF THE
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GOVERNMENT
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, AS PER THE CANADIAN
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GOVERNMENT
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RULE
, EVERYONE
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HAS TO
REIMBURSEMENT 14% OF THEIR SALARY WHICH IS NOT SUFFICIENT FOR THE PERSON TO SURVIVE WITH THE
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INCREADED
INFLATION.

ON THE OTHER SIDE, THE PRIME REASON BEHIND
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PAYING
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TAX
IS THE REVOLUTION OF THE COUNTRY IN VARIOUS FIELD AS THE AUTHORITY
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USED
TO HAVE
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ENOUGH
MONEY TO BRING
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SOME
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CHANGES
IN THE NATION.
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SO
WHEN WE
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PAY
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MONEU
TO THE REGIME, THEY RARE ABLE TO COOPERATE WITH EVOLUTION OF THE NATION.
FOR INSTANCE
, AS PER THE INDIAN
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GOVERNMENT
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RULE
, WHEN
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WE REMUNERATION
FULL
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TAX
THEN THE IMPOVERISHED
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PEOPLE
ARE ABLE TO
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GET
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HELP
IN SEVERAL SECTORS LIKE FOR STUDIES, MEDICAL
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TREATEMENT
AND
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SO
ON. THIS IS POSSIBLE
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BECAUSE
70% OF THE INDIAN CITIZENS
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PAY
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TAXEX
ON TIME.
THUS
, THE INDIA IS
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NOW
CONSIDERED AS DEVELOPED AND EDUCATED NATION AROUND THE GLOBE.

IN CONCLUSION
,
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TAX
INDEED
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HELP
EVERYONE IN
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SOME OF THE
WAY.
HOWEVER
,
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IS IS
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IMMPOSIBLE
FOR
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SOME
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LPWER
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CLASS
FAMILY TO
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PAY
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TAX
,
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SO
I BELIEVE, THERE SHOULD BE
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SOME
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RUL
WHERE THEY HAVE OPTION TO SELECTED
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HOPW
MUCH THEY WANT TO
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PAY
BACK TO THE REGIME AS PER THEIR FINANCIAL ABILITY. THIS WAY, MAY BE 905 CIVILIAN
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AGREE
TO
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PAY
THE
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TAX
WITHOUT ANY
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HESSITATION
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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Karl Albrecht

IELTS essay Describe a situation (or time) when you received some useful advice. What the situation wasWho gave you the adviceWhat the advice wasExplain how this advice was useful to you. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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