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Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend v.6

Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time.
The given table illustrates the proportion of average calories in the United States in the three different periods (1970, 1990 and 2010) In summary, the proportion of calories were increasing in all categories without Dairy and Vegetable. The total of all calories increased over a period of time. Moreover, Fruit provided law calorie compared to the other sources. According to the table, the total calorie was 2165 in 1970 and it increased and reached 2665 during the sixty years. In 1970, Meat, Eggs and Nuts provided the highest calorie compared to the other sources of calorie, while, Fruit given only 70. After twenty years, the highest calorie was provided by Gains (575); whereas, 260 and 125 calories were given by Dairy and Vegetable respectively. In 2010, the total calorie increased significantly, but only two sources (Dairy and Vegetable) declined. Added Fat provided higher amount of calorie and it was 640, while, Added Sugar given 460. Fruit provided only 85.
The
given
table illustrates the proportion of average calories in the United States in the three
different
periods (1970, 1990 and 2010)

In summary, the proportion of calories were increasing in all categories without Dairy and Vegetable. The total of all calories increased over a period of time.
Moreover
, Fruit
provided
law calorie compared to the other sources.

According to the table, the total calorie was 2165 in 1970 and it increased and reached 2665 during the sixty years. In 1970, Meat, Eggs and Nuts
provided
the highest calorie compared to the other sources of calorie, while, Fruit
given
only
70. After twenty years, the highest calorie was
provided
by Gains (575); whereas, 260 and 125 calories were
given
by Dairy and Vegetable
respectively
.

In 2010, the total calorie increased
significantly
,
but
only
two sources (Dairy and Vegetable) declined.
Added
Fat
provided
higher amount of calorie and it was 640, while,
Added
Sugar
given
460. Fruit
provided
only
85.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Take a look at the graphic and complete the task. The table shows average calorie intake in the United States over a period of time.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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