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Suppose you want to get away for the weekend to relax during the summertime. Would you rather stay at hotel at the beach or in the mountains? give reasons to support your choice. v.1

Suppose you want to get away for the weekend to relax during the summertime. Would you rather stay at hotel at the beach or in the mountains? give reasons to support your choice. v. 1
Gone were the times when just men used to work outside. In the contemporary world, both men and women are earning by matching shoulders. Some people thought that partners should share equal chores of household. This essay will discuss it is vital to divide the house task. Without any doubt, when two of them are working there should be balance of responsibility between them to avoid clashes and burden on one person which ultimately result lady resign from the job. For instance, if a husband and wife go office together and are coming back same time and only wife is cleaning, making food and doing laundry it will create clashes between them as only one person is doing everything and will tired. Thus, this is the main reason why always women quit their jobs after marriage. Another factor is children learn most of the things from their respective homes if from the beginning they are seeing that how their parents helping each other in every work it will benefit them in the long run rather than just person one is doing. For example, if father helps in cooking when the kid will become an adult and marry to someone ultimately, he will help his or her companion. Hence, it is a good way to teach their child also. In a nutshell, By splitting the housework it creates balance in the personal life as well as professional life in each one of them, which is must in today's era for the growth.
Gone were the times when
just
men
used
to work outside. In the contemporary world, both
men
and women are earning by matching shoulders.
Some
people
thought
that partners should share equal chores of household. This essay will discuss it is vital to divide the
house
task.

Without any doubt, when two of them are working there should be balance of responsibility between them to avoid clashes and burden on one person which
ultimately
result lady resign from the job.
For instance
, if a husband and wife go office together and are coming back same time and
only
wife is cleaning, making food and doing laundry it will create clashes between them as
only
one person is doing everything and will tired.
Thus
, this is the main reason why always women quit their jobs after marriage.

Another factor is children learn most of the things from their respective homes if from the beginning they are seeing that how their parents helping each other in every work it will benefit them in the long run
rather
than
just
person one is doing.
For example
, if father
helps
in cooking when the kid will become an adult and marry to someone
ultimately
, he will
help
his or her
companion.
Hence
, it is a
good
way to teach their child
also
.

In a nutshell, By splitting the housework it creates balance in the personal life
as well
as professional life in each one of them, which is
must
in
today
's era for the growth.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Suppose you want to get away for the weekend to relax during the summertime. Would you rather stay at hotel at the beach or in the mountains? give reasons to support your choice. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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