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You have seen an advertisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing you v.1

You have seen an advertisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing you v. 1
Publicity plays a vital role in building a reputation of the company or a product. As we are aware advertisement has a direct implication on a consumer choice. Although, it is argued that some practices of advertising used, can be unacceptable and immoral. In my essay I will share my views on the same. On one hand, we see a huge amount of money spend on publicity. The marketing of products is a gimmick, as it encourages people to buy products they may not need or cannot afford. Children and young people in particular are influenced by adverts showing the latest toys, clothing or music and this can put enormous pressure on the parents to buy these products. Furthermore, sometimes in order to gain more publicity the products portray a wrong image. For example, some sports stars promote high content of sugar drinks which can be detrimental for health. In addition, the advertising of tobacco products and alcohol has long been a controversial issue, but cigarette adverts have only recently been banned in many countries. It is quite possible that alcohol adverts encourage excessive consumption and underage drinking, yet restrictions have not been placed on this type of advertising in the same way as smoking. This kind of advertising has an adverse effect on a persons health. In conclusion, it is certainly true, that people are constantly being encouraged to buy products or services that might be too expensive, unnecessary or even unhealthy. However, aspects of advertising do appear to be morally wrong and are not acceptable in today's society.
Publicity plays a vital role in building a reputation of the
company
or a
product
.
As
we are aware advertisement has a direct implication on a consumer choice. Although, it
is argued
that
some
practices of advertising
used
, can be unacceptable and immoral. In my essay I will share my views on the same.

On one hand, we
see
a huge amount of money spend on publicity. The marketing of
products
is a gimmick, as it encourages
people
to
buy
products
they may not need or cannot afford. Children and young
people
in particular
are influenced
by adverts showing the latest toys, clothing or music and this can put enormous pressure on the parents to
buy
these
products
.
Furthermore
,
sometimes
in order to gain more publicity the
products
portray a
wrong
image.
For example
,
some
sports stars promote high content of sugar drinks which can be detrimental for health.

In addition
, the advertising of tobacco
products
and alcohol has long been a controversial issue,
but
cigarette adverts have
only
recently
been banned
in
many
countries. It is quite possible that alcohol adverts encourage excessive consumption and underage drinking,
yet
restrictions have not
been placed
on this type of advertising
in the same way
as smoking. This kind of advertising has an adverse effect on a
persons
health.

In conclusion
, it is
certainly
true, that
people
are
constantly
being encouraged
to
buy
products
or services that might be too expensive, unnecessary or even unhealthy.
However
, aspects of advertising do appear to be
morally
wrong
and are not acceptable in
today
's society.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay You have seen an advertisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing you v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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