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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how theyoppose specific points made in the reading passage. v.2

Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how theyoppose specific points made in the reading passage. v. 2
The reading article state that alturstic atc exists amoung human and animals. It is proved that with 2 example. However, the lecture disagree with these definition and give opposite example which is given in reading article. Firstly, according to the reading metariel human can act in unselfish behavior with other people. And it illustrates that with donation organs for strange people and share their food with them, but the lecture believe that people can not think others and they usually act in selfish way. The professor gives example that people can donation their example but it is only related with strange society which is mean that people know always is appluased by other strange people. In this reason despite people could share thier foods with other and donated thier organs with others, these acts can not provide people are unselfish to the professor. Secondly, the reading article gives that an animal example. This example shows that involved meerkats behaviour when they are hunting. When Meerkats are eating the one of them observers a predict to other, this means a meerkat does not eat while other had full of stomach. This meerkat if there is a dangerous station for other meerkats, it will give signal for others. However, according to the lecture it is not true example fot unselfish acting beacuse if there is a dangerous circumstance a meerkat is espace which is has responsible to give signal for other. Besides other meerkats never stay to after the they has full of stomach. And they never care of a meerkat which is not eat a meat for observation purpose. In the conlusion, even the reading article defend that animal and human are unselfish avaliables. The lecture provide that it is not true with two examples.
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article state that
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alturstic
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atc
exists
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amoung
human and animals. It
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, the
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lecture
disagree with
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these definition
and
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opposite
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which is
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article.

Firstly
, according to the
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reading
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metariel
human can act in
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unselfish
behavior with
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other
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people
. And it illustrates that with donation organs for strange
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people
and share their food with them,
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the
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lecture
believe that
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people
can not
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think
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others and
they
usually
act in selfish way. The professor
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gives
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example
that
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people
can donation their
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related with strange society which is mean that
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know always is
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appluased
by
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strange
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people
. In this reason despite
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people
could share
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thier
foods with
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other
and donated
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thier
organs with others, these acts can not provide
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people
are
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unselfish
to the professor.

Secondly
, the
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article
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gives
that an animal
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. This
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that involved
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behaviour
when they are hunting. When
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Meerkats
are eating the one of them observers
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a predict
to
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, this means a
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meerkat
does not eat while
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had full of stomach. This
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meerkat
if there is a
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station for
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other
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meerkats
, it will
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signal for others.
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, according to the
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it is not true
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example
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fot
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acting
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if there is a
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circumstance a
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meerkat
is
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espace
which is has responsible to
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signal for
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.
Besides
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other
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meerkats
never stay to after
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the they
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has
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meerkat
which is not
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eat
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a meat
for observation purpose.

In the
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conlusion
, even the
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article defend that animal and human are
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unselfish
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avaliables
. The
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lecture
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provide
that it is not true with two
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6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29Mistakes

IELTS essay Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how theyoppose specific points made in the reading passage. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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