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Subliminal PerceptionHumans are constantly perceiving visual and auditory stimuli. Sometimes our perception of these stimuli occurs consciously: we are aware of a stimulus and know that we are perceiving it. But our perception of a stimulus can also occur v.1

Subliminal PerceptionHumans are constantly perceiving visual and auditory stimuli. Sometimes our perception of these stimuli occurs consciously: we are aware of a stimulus and know that we are perceiving it. But our perception of a stimulus can also occur v. 1
Growing population seems to demand more place to live. Constructing new houses is of utmost importance, however, the only area left to construct it, is countryside. Preserving the nature is also a major concern for everyone in the society. This essay will discuss how this issue can be resolved to some extent. For living everyone has to work and for better opportunities most of the masses are moving to huge cities which automatically arises the necessity of a house. Every year there is major demand for construction of new houses, but no space available to build any, precisely only countryside is left. Expansion of the city will destroy the Mother Nature in the countryside by building roads, cutting trees and harming the ecosystem. Certainly there are many ways people can avoid this is such as resenting an apartment with fellow workers or by staying as a paying guest with a family, which has already become a trend. For example, A surgery was conducted which states that 55%, singles and 20%, partners are living in sharing. Unfortunately, anything done can not eradicate this issue of expansion provided that, the house planners should construct in certain ways that the it shall not harm the environment, such as, tree houses or Eco friendly houses. To take as an example, There are many constructors who are building the whole society without disrupting major trees and providing individual garden in the house along with huge parks to maintain the greenery level, which is a great success already. In conclusion, we live in a world, where we can find solutions to everything. So I think that either adjustments or a better constructing skills will ultimately solve the purpose.
Growing population seems to demand more place to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
. Constructing new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
is of utmost importance,
however
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
area
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
to construct it, is countryside. Preserving the nature is
also
a major concern for everyone in the society. This essay will discuss how this issue can
be resolved
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
extent.

For living everyone
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has to
work and for better opportunities most of the masses are moving to huge cities which
automatically
arises the necessity of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
. Every year there is major demand for construction of new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
no space available to build any,
precisely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
countryside is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
. Expansion of the city will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroy
the Mother Nature in the countryside by building roads, cutting trees and harming the ecosystem.
Certainly
there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
ways
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can avoid this is such as resenting an apartment with fellow workers or by staying as a paying guest with a family, which has already become a trend.
For example
, A surgery
was conducted
which states that 55%, singles and 20%, partners are living in sharing.

Unfortunately, anything done can not eradicate this issue of expansion provided that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
planners should construct in certain ways that
Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "it"?
the it
shall not harm the environment, such as, tree
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
or Eco friendly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
. To take as an example, There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
constructors who are building the whole society without disrupting major trees and providing individual garden in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
along with huge parks to maintain the greenery level, which is a great success already.

In conclusion
, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a world, where we can find solutions to everything.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that either adjustments or a better constructing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
will
ultimately
solve the purpose.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Subliminal PerceptionHumans are constantly perceiving visual and auditory stimuli. Sometimes our perception of these stimuli occurs consciously: we are aware of a stimulus and know that we are perceiving it. But our perception of a stimulus can also occur v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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