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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn a language. v.3

Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn a language. v. 3
There is no doubt that large numbers of people are travelling English speaking countries to pursue their education. Some people argue that foreign countries have more modern and latest teaching methodologies and have trained and professional staff to educate students. Students also get an opportunity to interact with local people that will help them to improve their communication skills in English. Others claim that people can also learn English in their country effectively and efficiently by using online resources, exploring books, visiting libraries and taking help from teachers. I believe that foreign countries immensely help to achieve desired langue skills. Nowadays, English has become an essentials constituent of the educational curriculum in non-English speaking countries, all institutions have adopted this change because of its undeniable benefits. Government and private sectors are making efforts to train their people in English by providing them various learning options that are easy and cheaply available within the country. On the other hand, learning in foreign countries is more convenient. One of the reasons is that being pioneer, they are well aware of the art of delivering knowledge and other learning techniques. Furthermore, people will get the chance to meet and communicate with local people and explore their cultures, that will help them in understanding language more. To sum up, I would like to say that studying and living in foreign country dramatically increased their knowledge and information about the language, which would be rather difficult and less effective in their native nation. However, accommodation, food and medical expenses could impede one’s dedications towards learning in English speaking country.
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get
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people
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in English. Others claim that
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people
can
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effectively
and
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help
from teachers. I believe that
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foreign
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countries
immensely
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help
to achieve desired
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countries
, all institutions have adopted this
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people
in English by providing them various
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learning
options that are easy and
cheaply
available within the country.

On the other hand
,
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learning
in
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foreign
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countries
is more convenient. One of the reasons is that being pioneer, they are well aware of the art of delivering knowledge and other
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learning
techniques.
Furthermore
,
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people
will
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get
the chance to
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meet
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people
and explore their cultures, that will
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help
them in understanding language more.

To sum up, I would like to say that studying and living in
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foreign
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country
dramatically
increased their knowledge and information about the language, which would be
rather
difficult and less effective in their native nation.
However
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learning
in
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English speaking
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27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn a language. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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