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Studying the English in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.2

Studying the English in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. v. 2
In this day and age most of the people are studying English in a nation with a lot of native speaker. But there are other ways on how they can learn that language even though they are not in that continent. To start with, most of the populace are migrating to other sovereign state which English is the national language. This is to enhance their knowledge and for the advancement of their career That is why they are learning the language of Englishmen to cope up with the natives. Another reason for that is barrier in the dialect because most of the persons living their knows the native language. In order for them to converse with the citizen they to learn mother tongue of that specific province. Which have a great effect on how they would apply for a job, attend to school, or simply by chatting to a friend. However, individuals who wish to voyage to English speaking countries are studying first in their homeland. Because most of the employers are looking for an individual who has a proficient in that dialect. For example in Great Britain they are in need of a lot of Nurses, but before they can apply they need to first get an overall band score 7 in IELTS. Which is why most of the populace are already in the midst of learning the language of England in order for them to reach their dreams and have a better career. In conclusion, I concur that learning the language of English in their home country is beneficial and economical for them. It could help them to acquire and understand that language quickly.
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are studying English in a nation with
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a lot of
native speaker.

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there are other ways on how they can learn that
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language
even though
they are not in that continent.

To
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start
with, most of the populace are migrating to other sovereign state which English is the national
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language
. This is to enhance their knowledge and for the advancement of their career
That is
why they are learning the
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language
of Englishmen to cope up with the natives. Another reason for
that is
barrier in the dialect
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
most of the persons living their knows the native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
. In order for them to converse with the citizen they to learn mother tongue of that specific province. Which have a great effect on how they would apply for a job, attend to school, or
simply
by chatting to a friend.

However
, individuals who wish to voyage to
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English speaking
countries are studying
first
in their homeland.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
most of the employers are looking for an individual who has a proficient in that dialect.
For example
in Great Britain they are in need of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
Nurses,
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but
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before
they can apply they need to
first
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get
an
overall
band score 7 in IELTS. Which is why most of the populace are already in the midst of learning the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
of England in order for them to reach their dreams and have a better career.

In conclusion
, I concur that learning the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
of English in their home country is beneficial and economical for them. It could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them to acquire and understand that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
quickly
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Studying the English in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
276 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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