With an unlimited access to education, entertainment and information, TV brings a diverse and fascinating world at the touch of a button. Hence, children excessively waste their time on watching TV regardless of taking the higher risk of being obesity or violent. There are some causes of this problem and several solutions proposed to tackle it.
The first reason is that the more overwhelming the workload is, the less attention to children parents pay. Clearly, instead of spending time on upbringing their kid, parents allow him to watch TV for self-education in order not to be bothered while they are working. The second root is the accelerating speed of entertainment industry. Inactiveness in youngster is born out of a sedentary lifestyle with never-ending animation shows on Disney Channel or BIBI TV.
However, a number of feasible solutions are suggested to deal with this challenging task. Firstly, it is parents’responsibilities to control children’s time on watching TV. For example, they can have their kids do the housework or recommend them going to friends’house. Also, schools should encourage students to participate in clubs, organize more physical competition and have picnics. As a result, students not only become seperated from TV but also have soft skills or make friends.
In conclusion, apparent explanations why children get addicted to TV and viable solutions are addressed to halt this issue effectively.
With
an unlimited access
to education, entertainment and information, TV brings a diverse and fascinating world at the touch of a button.
Hence
,
children
excessively
waste their time on watching TV regardless of taking the higher
risk
of being obesity or violent. There are
some
causes of this problem and several solutions proposed to tackle it.
The
first
reason is that the more overwhelming the workload is, the less attention to
children
parents pay.
Clearly
,
instead
of spending time on upbringing their kid, parents
allow
him to
watch
TV for self-education in order not to
be bothered
while they are working. The second root is the accelerating speed of entertainment industry.
Inactiveness
in youngster
is born
out of a sedentary lifestyle with never-ending animation
shows
on Disney Channel or
BIBI
TV.
However
, a number of feasible solutions
are suggested
to deal with this challenging task.
Firstly
, it is parents’responsibilities to control
children’s
time on watching TV.
For example
, they can have their kids do the housework or recommend them going to friends’
house
.
Also
, schools should encourage students to participate in clubs, organize more physical competition and have picnics.
As a result
, students not
only
become
seperated
from TV
but
also
have soft
skills
or
make
friends.
In conclusion
, apparent explanations why
children
get
addicted to TV and viable solutions
are addressed
to halt this issue
effectively
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes