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students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree? v.5

students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. v. 5
Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree? People may be shifting to the idea that libraries are unnecessary these days due to the fact that students have easy access to information via the internet. I disagree with this because libraries allow people to not only attain specialised types of information but also provide a quiet environment to study. Firstly, one reason to support libraries is that some types of specialised information cannot be found on the Internet. For instance, the Toronto reference library is a closed reserve facility where patrons can only access information on-site. In other words, some well-known academic authors do not immediately publish their recent work online, instead, they publish books explaining their analyses and results. To put it in another way, these books are usually found in school and public libraries before they appear on the world wide web. Thus, supporting libraries would give the community access to these valuable resources. Coupled with having a wealth of information, a suitable study environment is another benefit of a library. To illustrate this, research carried out by Oxford University in 2015 stated that students spent a large proportion of their time in the library researching and writing. In fact, libraries are perfect environments for this as they are very quiet and everyone there is motivated to study. Libraries have very strict noise rules and offer a large space with comfortable seating arrangements. As a result, they create an academic environment that encourages deep concentration. In conclusion, although the internet is of great benefit to students, I believe that libraries are still necessary as they grant access to specialized sources of information and their facilities provide better conditions for studying. It is suggested that more funding goes into libraries to ensure that they are well-deigned and resourceful facilities for a community.
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access
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information
online,
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agree
or disagree?

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People
may be shifting to the
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idea
that libraries are unnecessary these days due to the fact that
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students
have easy
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access
to
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information
via the internet. I disagree with this
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libraries
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allow
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people
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attain
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types of
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information
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but
also
provide a quiet
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environment
to study.

Firstly
, one reason to support libraries is that
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some
types of
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specialised
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information
cannot
be found
on the Internet.
For instance
, the Toronto reference library is a closed reserve facility where patrons can
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only
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access
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information
on-site.
In other words
,
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some
well-known academic authors do not immediately publish their recent work online,
instead
, they publish books explaining their analyses and results. To put it in another way, these books are
usually
found in school and public libraries
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before
they appear on the
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world wide web
.
Thus
, supporting libraries would give the community
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access
to these valuable resources.

Coupled with having a wealth of
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information
, a suitable study
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environment
is another benefit of a library. To illustrate this, research carried out by Oxford University in 2015 stated that
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students
spent a large proportion of their time in the library researching and writing. In fact, libraries are perfect
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environments
for this as they are
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very
quiet and everyone there
is motivated
to study. Libraries have
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very
strict noise
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rules
and offer a large space with comfortable seating arrangements.
As a result
, they create an academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
that encourages deep concentration.

In conclusion
, although the internet is of great benefit to
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students
, I believe that libraries are
still
necessary as they grant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
access
to
Do not mix variants of the same word ('specialized' and 'specialised') within a single text.
specialized
sources of
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information
and their facilities provide better conditions for studying. It
is suggested
that more funding goes into libraries to ensure that they are well-deigned and resourceful facilities for a community.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. v. 5

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
313 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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