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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to learn about life is by listening to the advice of others. Give specific examples to support your opinion. v.751

The best way to learn about life is by listening to the advice of others. Give specific examples to support your opinion. v. 751
There is no doubt that people advise plays an important role in out lives. People can avoid risky situations by following certain advices. Although some people, if asked, they would say that they do not like to follow anyone advice as it might impractical or unrealistic, People should always follow others advices especially if those who are giving the advices is their parents or elderly people. The basis for my views are as the following. Parents are the ones who lives with us, take care of their children and they are the only one know the best for their children. Given that they seeking to see their children successful, they devote all the experience they gain in their lives to support their children. For instance, Because my parents know that Stanford University in the United States Of America ranking as one of the best in North america. , My parents advised me to complete my study there. Not only that, but also they knew that studing in U. S. A will expose me to different culture, language and different live style. Because I listen to my parent' s advice, I had the chance to speake English, make new friends and explore different culture and life style. If I didn' t follow my parent' s advice, my experience would stay local. In addition to the previous point, listening to advises significantly make a differents. Certain situation consider normal in one country, could consider inappropriate behaviour in another country. Therefore, people seek the new country advise before they move there. For instance, while late night party and loud music consider normal in Egypte, It considered unacceptable behavior in U. S. A. Therefore, when I moved to U. S. A. for the first time I have been in a very embarrassing situation. People started to complain because I had the music on late at night. If I followed someone advice before I move to U. S. A I could avoid such an accord situation. As a conclusion, There is a saying says that " listening to people advice won' t hurt" . It true that people should thinks about others advises if they are familiar with the situation or have a previous experience. However, when it comes to a new experience, people have to follow their parents and elderly advises before they reevaluate it.
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plays an
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important
role in out
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lives
.
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can avoid risky
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situations
by following certain
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advices
. Although
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some
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people
, if asked, they would say that they do not like to
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follow
anyone
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advice
as it might impractical or unrealistic,
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People
should always
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follow
others
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advices
especially
if those who are giving the
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advices
is their
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parents
or elderly
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people
. The basis for my views are as the following.

Parents are the ones who
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lives
with us, take care of their
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children and
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one know the best for their
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children
.
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they seeking
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their
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children
successful, they devote all the
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experience
they gain in their
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lives
to support their
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children
.
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,
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Because
my
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parents
know that Stanford University in the
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United States Of America
ranking as one of the best in
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North america
.
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,
My
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parents
advised me to complete my study there. Not
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only
that,
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also
they knew that
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studing
in U. S. A will expose me to
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different
culture, language and
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different
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live
style.
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I listen to my
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advice
, I had the chance to
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speake
English,
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make
new friends and explore
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different
culture and life style. If I
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didn&
#039; t
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follow
my
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parent&
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advice
, my
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experience
would stay local.

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to the previous point, listening to
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advises
significantly
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make
a
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differents
. Certain
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situation
consider normal in one country, could consider inappropriate
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behaviour
in another country.
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,
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people
seek the new country
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advise
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before
they
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move
there.
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, It considered unacceptable behavior in U. S. A.
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People
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started
to complain
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because
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advice
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before
I
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move
to U. S.
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could avoid such an accord situation.

As a conclusion, There is a saying says that
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; listening to
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people
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advice
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won&
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;
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.
It true that
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people
should
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thinks
about others
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advises
if they are familiar with the
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situation
or have a previous
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experience
.
However
, when it
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comes
to a new
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experience
,
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people
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have to
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follow
their
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parents
and elderly
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advises
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before
they reevaluate it.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
52Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Mistakes

IELTS essay The best way to learn about life is by listening to the advice of others. Give specific examples to support your opinion. v. 751

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
391 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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