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Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree? v.4

Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. v. 4
In this age of technology, accessing the material online has gotten easier over the years and this process is making local libraries inessential. It is my opinion that libraries are no longer needed since data can be easily accessed online. Firstly, the internet has just as much if not more information readily available. Nowadays, the internet is updated daily from different sources, resulting in it being current and relevant. For example newspaper articles and other reading are posted online to make it more accessible and cost effective. Needless to say, some websites are more worthy of your trust than others, but the same is true for printed material as well. Everything that can be found in an encyclopedia, dictionary or book has been online just a click away. Furthermore, A student can purchase a book need for a class or just for leisure reading and have it on their electronic devices to be used at their own convenience. To illustrate, colleges are now offering reading material online from ebooks to class work. While the library has a lot of useful material it might be more inconvenient for a student to get there. Instead of going, a student can research data needed for assignment quickly. Moreover, Going to the library may take more time than one has once you include both travelling to the library and the time it takes to locate information needed. In conclusion libraries are outdated and not scalable to the demanding needs of younger generations and students. Conversely, the internet is a preferred method for students to access necessary resources because it provides convenience, safety and cost efficiency.
In this age of technology, accessing the
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material
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online
has gotten easier over the years and this process is making local libraries inessential. It is my opinion that libraries are no longer needed since data can be
easily
accessed online.

Firstly
, the internet has
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just
as much if not more information
readily
available. Nowadays, the internet
is updated
daily from
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different
sources, resulting in it being
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current
and relevant.
For example
newspaper articles and other reading
are posted
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online
to
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make
it more accessible and cost effective. Needless to say,
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some
websites are more worthy of your trust than others,
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but
the same is true for printed
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material
as well
.

Everything that can
be found
in an encyclopedia, dictionary or book has been
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online
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just
a click away.
Furthermore
, A
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student
can
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purchase
a book need for a
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class
or
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just
for leisure reading and have it on their electronic devices to be
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used
at their
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own
convenience. To illustrate, colleges are
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now
offering reading
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material
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online
from
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ebooks
to
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class
work.

While the library has
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a lot of
useful
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material
it might be more inconvenient for a
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student
to
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get
there.
Instead
of going, a
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student
can research data needed for assignment
quickly
.
Moreover
, Going to the library may take more time than one has once you include both travelling to the library and the time it takes to locate information needed.

In conclusion
libraries
are outdated
and not scalable to the demanding needs of younger generations and
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students
.
Conversely
, the internet is a preferred method for
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students
to access necessary resources
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it provides convenience, safety and cost efficiency.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Students today can easily access information online, so libraries are no longer necessary. v. 4

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
271 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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