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Students should choose an university major that the prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement v.1

Students should choose an university major that the prepares them for high-paying careers. with this statement v. 1
Choosing which course to study has been challenging choices for most students. Almost every subject shows the highest possibilities in the job market, however, some courses have offered high demand along with higher wages. This essay will discuss why I completely with a graduate should choose a major that prepares for high-paying jobs are complete skills and the highest job chances. Firstly, the job market is highly competitive. The huge number of student graduates from the different colleges and the university which creates pressure for candidates to get employment. Nowadays, when companies call for the selection of an employee for the job the maximum number of people visit the company which also shows the presence of the people. The survey, published by The Himalayan Times illustrated that generally attendance of 200% of candidates is seen which more than expected by the company. Getting selected for jobs is difficult without proper knowledge about the specific field. The secondary reason is students are provided with different and unique skills. Every course is interconnected with each other to some extent. However, choosing a specialization in one specific sector equipped with skills that others are not familiar with which provides the benefit to a student preparing with the major subject. For instance, in Information and Technology area, web development, networking and basic idea about these topics are provided, but the core and profound skills are not handed to the subject, however, after choosing any major like cybersecurity, ethical hacking, and provides many more specific skill along with proper application education. Hence, generally used idea is known to all, although, they lack special knowledge. This essay discussed the maximum benefits provided by major subjects and relatively high chances of employment for graduate students with major subjects. In my opinion, I completely agree that university students should choose a major subject which has a high returning future.
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students
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subject
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shows
the highest possibilities in the
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job
market,
however
,
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some
courses have offered high demand along with higher wages. This essay will discuss why I completely with a graduate should choose a
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major
that prepares for high-paying
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jobs
are complete
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skills
and the highest
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job
chances.

Firstly
, the
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job
market is
highly
competitive. The huge number of
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student
graduates from the
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different
colleges and the university which creates pressure for candidates to
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get
employment. Nowadays, when
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companies
call for the selection of an employee for the
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job
the maximum number of
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people
visit the
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company
which
also
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shows
the presence of the
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people
. The survey, published by The Himalayan Times illustrated that
generally
attendance of 200% of candidates is
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seen
which more than
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expected
by the
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company
. Getting selected for
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jobs
is difficult without proper knowledge about the specific field.

The secondary reason is
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students
are provided
with
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different
and unique
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skills
. Every course
is interconnected
with each other to
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some
extent.
However
, choosing a specialization in one specific sector equipped with
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skills
that others are not familiar with which provides the benefit to a
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student
preparing with the
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major
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subject
.
For instance
, in Information and Technology area, web development, networking and basic
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idea
about these topics
are provided
,
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but
the core and profound
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skills
are not handed to the
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subject
,
however
, after choosing any
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major
like cybersecurity, ethical hacking, and provides
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many
more specific
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skill
along with proper application education.
Hence
,
generally
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used
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idea
is known
to all, although, they lack special knowledge.

This essay discussed the maximum benefits provided by
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major
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subjects
and
relatively
high chances of employment for graduate
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students
with
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major
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subjects
. In my opinion, I completely
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agree
that university
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students
should choose a
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major
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subject
which has a high returning future.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Students should choose an university major that the prepares them for high-paying careers. with this statement v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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