Nowadays, when students can perform well, many schools give them a reward. This is a better way than punished when they do something wrong. In my view, I totally agree with this statement.
There are many reasons that I agree that rewarded is greater than punished. The main reason is human love to hearing good words from others, especially, children because every word that teachers talk to them will affect their behaviour and their lives in the future. For example, if the children received rewards from teachers due to perfect homeworks. This will motivate them to be a good student and always do homework. Finally, they can get a higher grade, which causes them more confident in further situations when they grow up. In addition, adults who have impressed in school experience will encourage their children to go to school because a lot of advantages when they grow up.
Another reason is punished cause of bad experience in childhood. For instance, students who got a punished in the young age at school. They do not like to go to school because they afraid to punish again or some students was embarrassed when they make a mistake. That lead to students always absent class. Since, they are growing up to be an adults they will not have any knowledge of finding a professional job. Furthermore, they will be a society problems in the future, like to be a thief.
In conclusion, I believe that reward is more beneficial than punish. Everyone like rewards which will fulfil their happiness and proud experience in childhood.
Nowadays, when
students
can perform well,
many
schools
give them a
reward
. This is a better way than
punished
when they do something
wrong
. In my view, I
totally
agree
with this statement.
There are
many
reasons that I
agree
that rewarded is greater than
punished
. The main reason is human
love
to hearing
good
words from others,
especially
, children
because
every word that teachers talk to them will affect their
behaviour
and their
lives
in the future.
For example
, if the children received
rewards
from teachers due to perfect
homeworks
. This will motivate them to be a
good
student
and always do homework.
Finally
, they can
get
a higher grade, which causes them more confident in
further
situations when they grow up.
In addition
, adults who have impressed in
school
experience will encourage their children to go to
school
because
a lot of
advantages when they grow up.
Another reason is
punished
cause of
bad
experience in childhood.
For instance
,
students
who
got
a
punished
in the young age at
school
. They do not like to go to
school
because
they afraid
to punish again or
some
students
was embarrassed
when they
make
a mistake. That lead to
students
always absent
class
.
Since
, they are growing up to be
an adults
they will not have any knowledge of finding a professional job.
Furthermore
, they will be a society problems in the future, like to be a thief.
In conclusion
, I believe that
reward
is more beneficial than punish. Everyone like
rewards
which will fulfil their happiness and proud experience in childhood.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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