Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Students often like to study with others in a group. What do you think are the benefits of group study? Give at least one benefit. Explain your reasons. v.1

Students often like to study with others in a group. What do you think are the benefits of group study? Give at least one benefit. Explain your reasons. v. 1
admittedly internet is one of the big tensions of the last few days oldies people used for ordering groceries and getting no different aspects that exist in the world divided as well as drawbacks link with the not explain in the father paragraphs to begin with the me and you was off that is the Speedy communication things can get connected to the in a few seconds and has it bills I kind of relationship among the different natives furthermore it is the sort of entertainment for the angels best downloading songs movies and Rhapsody from the world rap by Travis boredom does it potentially contribute to other people social and social Asheville as set in addition to it does also is the life of a people by off online services such as utility bills ordering food on booking movie tickets booking are tickets and buying clothes and many more are the salida services provided by the websites also spares that guy with a photo of the noodles I need a feel more reliable on this new technology on the contrary the major be married associated with it is the risk of loss of personal information tigers steals the confidential database of the sensitive websites read codes debit card pains and so on go from over the Disco virus I smell computer is also the negative Hulk photos of Commerce has for declare use of this invasion can be go to human beings privacy in conclusion it can be real it is a double-edged sword in the modern times the one side first enormous benefits to the society on the other side electronic devices also information wake me be used wisely an for the betterment of the common people
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
admittedly
internet is one of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
tensions of the last few days oldies
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for ordering groceries and getting no
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
aspects that exist in the world divided
as well
as drawbacks link with the not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
in the father paragraphs to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with
Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "me"?
the me
and you
Use second person verb with 'you': "are" or "were".
was
off
that is
the Speedy communication things can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
connected to the in a few seconds and has it bills I kind of relationship among the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
natives
furthermore
it is the sort of entertainment for the angels best downloading songs movies and Rhapsody from the world rap by Travis boredom does it
potentially
contribute to other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
social and social Asheville as set
in addition
to it does
also
Did you mean "be"? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
is
the life of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
by off online services such as utility bills ordering food on booking movie tickets booking are tickets and buying clothes and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more are the
Possible spelling mistake found.
salida
services provided by the websites
also
spares that guy with a photo of the noodles I need a feel more reliable on this new technology
on the contrary
the major
be married
associated with it is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
of loss of personal information tigers steals the confidential database of the sensitive websites read codes debit card pains and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on go from over the Disco virus I smell computer is
also
the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
Hulk photos of Commerce has for declare
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of this invasion can be
Consider using a past participle here: "gone".
go
to human
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "beings'" or "being's"?
beings
privacy
in conclusion
it can be real it is a double-edged sword in the modern times the one side
first
enormous benefits to the society on the other side electronic devices
also
information wake me be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
wisely
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
for the betterment of the common
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay Students often like to study with others in a group. What do you think are the benefits of group study? Give at least one benefit. Explain your reasons. v. 1

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
288 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts