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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. v. 3
The communication plays a vital role in an individual life. Some intellectuals argue that spoken communication has a predominant role rather than verbal communication. Thus, I will illustrate my perspectives to summarize. To begin with, most formal and potent form of transaction is verbal. For instance, politicians win the masses heart via their oratory skills. Individuals believe that when they converse with other people on social platforms they have different behaviour rather than usual. Adversely, when they communicate via a verbal medium, they convey messages in conventional form. In addition, formal approach to communicate with other intellectuals is spoken communication. For example, when the two developed countries official’s meet on an occasion, what they talk with each other that create the image on people. Someone said that the first impression is the last impression. As a matter of fact, people try to resolve grievances with them by face to face meetings. The eyes are the mirror of soul and face is the portrait of your persona. On the flip side, written transaction is even mightier than verbal. A contract between an intern and an organization is always in writing papers. Individuals put much reliance on written information rather than spoken. The pen is powerful and acute than a sword. For example, people don’t believe rumours, but when they read any written Intel about it, they put trust on it. Books are the salient feature of written communication. For instance, novelists cast all the sentiments in their novels, due to that novel people might get caught the novelist inner self. To summarize, spoken and written the both are the straight resources for communication and both have the equal quality. But personally I agree with the objective because, differences can be created by social platform and on the contrary resolve by face to face conversation. To sustain the relationship stronger verbal communication is the important aspect.
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plays a vital role in an individual life.
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Some
intellectuals argue that spoken
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communication
has a predominant role
rather
than
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verbal
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communication
.
Thus
, I will illustrate my perspectives
to summarize
.

To
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begin
with, most formal and potent form of transaction is
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verbal
.
For instance
, politicians win the masses heart via their oratory
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skills
. Individuals believe that when they converse with other
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people
on social platforms they have
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different
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behaviour
rather
than usual.
Adversely
, when they communicate via a
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verbal
medium, they convey messages in conventional form.
In addition
, formal approach to communicate with other intellectuals
is spoken
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communication
.
For example
, when the two
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developed countries
official’s
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meet
on an occasion, what they talk with each other that create the image on
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people
. Someone said that the
first
impression is the last impression. As a matter of fact,
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people
try to resolve grievances with them by
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face
to
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face
meetings. The eyes are the mirror of soul and
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face
is the portrait of your persona.

On the flip side,
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written
transaction is even mightier than
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verbal
. A contract between an intern and an organization is always in writing papers. Individuals put much reliance on
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written
information
rather
than spoken. The pen is powerful and
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acute
than a sword.
For example
,
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people
don’t believe
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rumours
,
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but
when they read any
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written
Intel about it, they put trust on it. Books are the salient feature of
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written
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communication
.
For instance
, novelists cast all the sentiments in their novels, due to that novel
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people
might
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get
caught the novelist inner self.

To summarize
, spoken and
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written
the both are the straight resources for
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communication
and both have the equal quality.
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But
personally
I
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agree
with the objective
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because
, differences can
be created
by social platform and
on the contrary
resolve by
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face
to
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face
conversation. To sustain the relationship stronger
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verbal
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communication
is the
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important
aspect.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
Language is the blood of the soul into which thoughts run and out of which they grow.
Oliver Wendell Holmes

IELTS essay Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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