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Speaking topic in text: Flagship Species Environmental organizations work to protect plants and animals whose natural habitats are threatened by human activity. One way they do this is by selecting a particular species to represent the threatened habitat v.1

Speaking topic in text: Flagship Species Environmental organizations work to protect plants and animals whose natural habitats are threatened by human activity. One way they do this is by selecting a particular species to represent the threatened habitat v. 1
Some people opine that a large number of wedding parties, birthday parties, and other celebrations has significantly increased in the contemporary world, which means these celebrations are a waste of money. On the other hand, some opponents argue that certain parties can be crucial to someone's life as well as our society. In this essay, I will elaborate the merits and demerits of the issue and provide my opinion. The main advantage of spending a tremendous amount of money on the celebrations is once in a lifetime for individuals. We are able to take photos at the unforgettable moment in order to keep memories in our mind. For instance, a certain nation spends considerable expenses to national holidays such as fireworks, massive festivals, and parades. These special occasions are definitely worthwhile for people and society. As a result, memories and remained photos are permanent. On the contrary, we need to take into account of the disadvantages that many developing countries cannot afford to celebrate their offsprings birthday parties. Therefore, we can donate even a trivial amount of money to underprivileged juveniles rather than spending money for the parties, then we will be more satisfied and thankful what we have now. Consequently, I believe that supporting the basic needs of those nations has a huge positive impact on our society and people instead of spending tons of money for parties. In conclusion, it is undeniable that celebrations are essential for many people due to once in a lifetime. However, I reckon that there are a lot of children who undergo with regard to poverty. We cannot be ignored that those who are not even able to celebrate their own birthday party.
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, and other
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celebrations
are a waste of
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money
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opponents argue that certain
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parties
can be crucial to someone's life
as well
as our society. In this essay, I will elaborate the merits and demerits of the issue and provide my opinion.

The main advantage of spending a tremendous amount of
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money
on the
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celebrations
is once in a lifetime for individuals. We are able to take photos at the unforgettable moment in order to
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keep
memories in our mind.
For instance
, a certain nation spends considerable expenses to national holidays such as fireworks, massive festivals, and parades. These special occasions are definitely worthwhile for
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people
and society.
As a result
, memories and remained photos are permanent.

On the contrary
, we need to take into account of the disadvantages that
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many
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developing countries
cannot afford to celebrate their
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offsprings
birthday
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parties
.
Therefore
, we can donate even a trivial amount of
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money
to underprivileged juveniles
rather
than spending
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money
for the
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parties
, then we will be more satisfied and thankful what we have
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now
.
Consequently
, I believe that supporting the basic needs of those nations has a huge
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positive
impact on our society and
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people
instead
of spending tons of
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money
for parties.

In conclusion
, it is undeniable that
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celebrations
are essential for
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many
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people
due to once in a lifetime.
However
, I reckon that there are
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a lot of
children who undergo with regard to poverty. We cannot be
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ignored
that those who are not even able to celebrate their
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own
birthday
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party
.
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IELTS essay Speaking topic in text: Flagship Species Environmental organizations work to protect plants and animals whose natural habitats are threatened by human activity. One way they do this is by selecting a particular species to represent the threatened habitat v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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