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Flagship SpeciesEnvironmental organizations work to protect plants and animals whose natural habitats are threatened by human activity. One way they do this is by selecting a particular species to represent the threatened habitat to the general public. Th v.1

Flagship SpeciesEnvironmental organizations work to protect plants and animals whose natural habitats are threatened by human activity. One way they do this is by selecting a particular species to represent the threatened habitat to the general public. Th v. 1
There are several constraints for getting admissions into educational institutes for both higher- and lower-class students of the community. I completely disaccord with this statement as most of the students are facilitated with subsidy or scholarships and moreover, plenty of schools or colleges are established across the corners for the ease and convenience of the youths. To begin with, educational institutes are providing scholarships to encourage all kind of students to continue their higher education. That is to say that students are less burdened with tuition fees. As a result, this keeps them motivated to study further irrespective of their family background and financial support. According to a recent survey, the increased literacy rate among youths in the Srilanka is because of the subsidized tuition fees provided by all the educational institutes. This has attracted several students to continue their higher education smoothly without many constraints. Besides, several colleges are established in and across the cities for the ease of the students. This has provided options to join the colleges as per the convenience of their commute, time and standards. For instance, the Indian government and private institutes have managed to establish a minimum of 15 educational institutes for every district that will suffice the requirement of all the students. The demand for the schools is in proportionate with the students of the community. In conclusion, modern society with government support has eased the admission and availability of seats at several schools and colleges for every student irrespective of their social and financial status of their family.
There are several constraints for getting admissions into
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educational
institutes for both higher- and lower-
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class
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students
of the community. I completely
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disaccord
with this statement as most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
are facilitated
with subsidy or scholarships and
moreover
,
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plenty
of schools or colleges
are established
across the corners for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
and convenience of the youths.

To
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begin
with,
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educational
institutes are providing scholarships to encourage all kind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to continue their higher education.
That is
to say that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
are less burdened with tuition fees.
As a result
, this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keeps
them motivated to study
further
irrespective of their family background and financial support. According to a recent survey, the increased literacy rate among youths in the
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Srilanka
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the subsidized tuition fees provided by all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
educational
institutes. This has attracted several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to continue their higher education
smoothly
without
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
constraints.

Besides
, several colleges
are established
in and across the cities for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. This has provided options to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the colleges as per the convenience of their commute, time and standards.
For instance
, the Indian
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and private institutes have managed to establish a minimum of 15
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
educational
institutes for every district that will suffice the requirement of all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
. The demand for the schools is in proportionate with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
of the community.

In conclusion
, modern society with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
support has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
eased
the admission and availability of seats at several schools and colleges for every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
irrespective of their social and financial status of their family.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Flagship SpeciesEnvironmental organizations work to protect plants and animals whose natural habitats are threatened by human activity. One way they do this is by selecting a particular species to represent the threatened habitat to the general public. Th v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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