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Sometimes students have to write papers. Sometimes they have to give oral presentations. Which activity do you think is better for students? And you? Include details and examples in your explanation. v.1

Sometimes students have to write papers. Sometimes they have to give oral presentations. Which activity do you think is better for students? And you? Include details and examples in your explanation. v. 1
People have faced a moral battle with themselves in different situations, one of them is about the importance of telling the truth and how lies can be acceptable depending on the situation. In this essay we will discuss how honesty affects our daily life with some relevant examples to elaborate further. First, it is a very important value for everyone, especially when it comes to social relationships in today's world, because if you are not honest about your own feelings and thoughts, others cannot trust you, and it will be more difficult to make friends and develop different oral expression skills such as speaking fluently and confidently. Therefore, honesty is a good thing since it plays a crucial role in our life; It helps us to be better people and to maintain stable interpersonal relationships, in addition to balance and good mental health that is managed over time. However, there are those who think that sometimes it is better not to tell the truth as we ask ourselves daily, should we tell the truth? The reality is that most people respond by saying that they must be honest, but most of the time they usually lie. This happens because if you look at the truth from the surface, it looks very simple to solve, but when you dig deeper we realize that life is harder than we think and things like these tend to be confusing such as telling lies since lying becomes a habit over time because telling the truth can be a problem or can hurt someone, so lies become the easiest way out. In conclusion, the truth composes us as whole people and capable of reasoning and taking responsibility for our actions, however, nowadays it is very difficult to always be correct, so lies are our hiding place and at the same time they are our pain.
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different
situations, one of them is about the importance of telling the
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truth
and how
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lies
can be acceptable depending on the situation. In this essay we will discuss how honesty affects our daily life with
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some
relevant examples to elaborate
further
.

First
, it is a
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very
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important
value for everyone,
especially
when it
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comes
to social relationships in
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today
's world,
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because
if you are not honest about your
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own
feelings and thoughts, others cannot trust you, and it will be more difficult to
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make
friends and develop
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different
oral expression
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skills
such as speaking
fluently
and
confidently
.
Therefore
, honesty is a
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good
thing since it plays a crucial role in our life; It
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helps
us to be better
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people
and to maintain stable interpersonal relationships,
in addition
to balance and
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good
mental health that
is managed
over time.

However
, there are those who
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think
that
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sometimes
it is better not to
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tell
the
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truth
as we ask ourselves daily, should we
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tell
the
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truth
? The reality is that most
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people
respond by saying that they
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must
be honest,
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but
most of the time they
usually
lie. This happens
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because
if you look at the
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truth
from the surface, it looks
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very
simple to solve,
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but
when you dig deeper we realize that life is harder than we
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think
and things like these tend to be confusing such as telling
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lies
since lying becomes a habit over time
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because
telling the
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truth
can be a problem or can hurt someone,
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so
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lies
become the easiest way out.

In conclusion
, the
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truth
composes us as whole
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people
and capable of reasoning and taking responsibility for our actions,
however
, nowadays it is
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very
difficult to always be correct,
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so
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lies
are our hiding place and at the same time they are our pain.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Sometimes students have to write papers. Sometimes they have to give oral presentations. Which activity do you think is better for students? And you? Include details and examples in your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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