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Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer? v.3

Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer? v. 3
Nowadays living long distances among spouses is becoming more and more common than it used to be decades or centuries ago. It is considered by some people that supporting such relationships may be hardly, nervously and stressful. This essay will examine most causes of these associations between individuals and provide some possible solutions for feeling closer each other. There are a lot of reasons why people have to live far from their spouses, but I would like to point out the main two of them: an excellent job and education opportunities. As for a career, well-paid works often foster individuals to make an unpopular decision such as a below-mentioned one. A salary, working conditions and others facilities, for example, a company' s car or flat, are crucial causes. Moreover, sometimes it is impossible to get a good education in person' s city or even their country, consequently, people tend to study far from their home. For example, my mother studied abroad for 5 years since the universities of overseas are more affordable and better than in Russia. My family could overcome such a hard period of time. Modern technologies help people manage with such situations, not to feel alone and allow to be close to each other. Social networks, for example, Facebook or VK, and messengers such as Skype, Wechat and WhatsApp, provide individuals with this possibility enabling them to call and look at their favorites. What is more, a person should try to spend with their family the most essential events: birthdays, New Years and Christmas. To sum up, a good job and well education may lead to the situation when spouses have to live far from, but contemporary technologies can help them feel closer.
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some
possible solutions for feeling closer each other.

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live
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Modern technologies
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help
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manage with such situations, not to feel alone and
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allow
to be close to each other. Social networks,
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, Facebook or
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VK
, and messengers such as Skype,
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Wechat
and WhatsApp, provide individuals with this possibility enabling them to call and look at their favorites.
What is more
, a person should try to spend with their family the most essential
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events
: birthdays, New Years and Christmas.

To sum up, a
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good
job and well education may lead to the situation when spouses
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have to
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live
far from,
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but
contemporary technologies can
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help
them feel closer.
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IELTS essay Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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