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Someone who was considered an educated person in the past for example in your parents or grandparents generation would not be considered an educated person today Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.1

Someone who was considered an educated person in the past for example in your parents or grandparents generation would not be considered an educated person today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 1
These days many people struggle to eat healthy food consistently. A primary cause of this trend is the availability of cheap and quick dining options for people who don’t make time to prepare healthy food at home. For these people, the solution involves allocating more time for grocery shopping and cooking. Many people have a poor diet because they don’t set aside the required time to eat healthier options. Without question, balancing work, school, family, and social activities can be very challenging. One way people deal with competing obligations is to cut corners whenever possible, but especially when it comes to food. Fast food and packaged microwaveable food are both easy to find and relatively inexpensive. Unfortunately, they also tend to be less healthy than foods cooked at home with fresh ingredients. Nevertheless, in order to save time, many people are willing to consume these unhealthy foods. The only real solution to this problem is to set aside more time to shop for healthy food and prepare it at home. For some people, this may seem impossible. A working parent, for example, probably does not want to spend precious hours in the kitchen cooking when that time could be spent with the kids. With just a little bit of online research, however, this parent could find many healthy recipes that do not take a long time to prepare. For example, a simple pasta or rice dish with vegetables can be ready in 20-30 minutes, offering much more nutritional value than a hamburger and french fries. Alternatively, some people set aside time on the weekends to cook large batches of food that can be reheated during the week. With advanced planning like this, it should be possible to replace at least some unhealthy meals with home-cooked options on a regular basis. To conclude, even though time is extremely limited for many people today, it is important to resist the temptation to take shortcuts in the kitchen. Healthy eating may require effort and planning, but prioritizing healthy eating is necessary to maintain good health.
These days
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struggle to eat
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healthy
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food
consistently
. A primary cause of this trend is the availability of
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cheap
and quick dining options for
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people
who don’t
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make
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time
to prepare
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healthy
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food
at home. For these
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people
, the solution involves allocating more
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time
for grocery shopping and cooking.

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people
have a poor diet
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because
they don’t set aside the required
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time
to eat healthier options. Without question, balancing work, school, family, and social activities can be
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very
challenging. One way
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people
deal with competing obligations is to
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cut
corners whenever possible,
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especially
when it
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comes
to
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food
.
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Fast
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food
and packaged microwaveable
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food
are both easy to find and
relatively
inexpensive. Unfortunately, they
also
tend to be less
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healthy
than
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foods
cooked at home with fresh ingredients.
Nevertheless
, in order to save
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time
,
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many
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people
are willing to consume these unhealthy foods.

The
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only
real solution to this problem is to set aside more
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time
to shop for
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healthy
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food
and prepare it at home. For
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some
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people
, this may seem impossible. A working parent,
for example
,
probably
does not want to spend precious hours in the kitchen cooking when that
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time
could
be spent
with the kids. With
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just
a
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little bit
of online research,
however
, this parent could find
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many
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healthy
recipes that do not take a long
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time
to prepare.
For example
, a simple pasta or rice dish with vegetables can be ready in 20-30 minutes, offering much more nutritional value than a hamburger and french fries.
Alternatively
,
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some
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people
set aside
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time
on the weekends to cook large batches of
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food
that can
be reheated
during the week. With advanced planning like this, it should be possible to replace at least
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some
unhealthy meals with home-cooked options on a regular basis.

To conclude
,
even though
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time
is
extremely
limited for
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many
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people
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today
, it is
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important
to resist the temptation to take shortcuts in the kitchen.
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Healthy
eating may require effort and planning,
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but
prioritizing
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healthy
eating is necessary to maintain
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good
health.
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IELTS essay Someone who was considered an educated person in the past for example in your parents or grandparents generation would not be considered an educated person today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
342 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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