Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’ generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. v.2
Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’ generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer. v. 2
For a few decades, many countries have banned smoking in public due to cause ill effects on other people. However, some people who are addicted, are doing in private places. In my opinion, it has more advantages as they leave the building for smoking. Firstly, it does not make harmful effects on others. Secondly, others cannot be influenced by this habit.
To begin with, we could not stop the people who have already become a chain smoker, so if the private places for smoking, then other people would not be suffering from the side effects of it. Furthermore, Smokers feel that cigarette is a stress relief and become an active person once they have done smoking. For instance, the World Health Organisation surveyed that many private organizations across the globe created a separate area for the people who wish to smoke.
Secondly, despite showing an awareness program or increasing the cost of cigarettes, the people would not leave smoking as they believe it as their habit. However, they would not be influenced by other people like kids. It would create a severe impact on children. Therefore, they should avoid smoking before them. For instance, the Government of India initiated, screening the short film about smoking causes during the interval time of the movie for creating awareness amongst their citizens.
To conclude, many countries across the globe are trying that smoking will be moving away from their people by implementing several steps. Therefore, smokers should realize the fact and stop the harmful thing permanently.
For a few decades,
many
countries have banned
smoking
in public due to cause ill effects on
other
people
.
However
,
some
people
who
are addicted
, are doing in private places. In my opinion, it has more advantages as they
leave
the building for
smoking
.
Firstly
, it does not
make
harmful effects on others.
Secondly
, others cannot
be influenced
by this habit.
To
begin
with, we could not
stop
the
people
who have already become a chain smoker,
so
if the private places for
smoking
, then
other
people
would not be suffering from the side effects of it.
Furthermore
, Smokers feel that cigarette is a
stress
relief and become an active person once they have done
smoking
.
For instance
, the World Health
Organisation
surveyed that
many
private
organizations
across the globe created a separate area for the
people
who wish to smoke.
Secondly
, despite showing an awareness program or increasing the cost of cigarettes, the
people
would not
leave
smoking
as they believe it as their habit.
However
, they would not
be influenced
by
other
people
like kids. It would create a severe impact on children.
Therefore
, they should avoid
smoking
before
them.
For instance
, the
Government
of India initiated, screening the short film about
smoking
causes during the interval time of the movie for creating awareness amongst their citizens.
To conclude
,
many
countries across the globe are trying that
smoking
will be moving away from their
people
by implementing several steps.
Therefore
, smokers should realize the fact and
stop
the harmful thing
permanently
.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes