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Some workers like working for a large company. Other workers prefer working for a smaller company. Which do you like: working for a small company or working for a large company? Give specific reasons and examples to support your point of view. v.1

Some workers like working for a large company. Other workers prefer working for a smaller company. Which do you like: working for a small company or working for a large company? Give specific reasons and examples to support your point of view. v. 1
The advancement in this modern-day technology has made life much easier to every individual. An example of this great impact of technology is the building of the air plane, which in turn as created opportunity for average people to travel far and explore, since it's less expensive. Although, many suggest, the less expensive air plane should be banned because it causes air pollution. In this article, I will discuss while the advantages of the air plane cannot be compared to its disadvantages. Without the introduction of the cheap air flight, many would in fact be leaving in the old ways, as average travellers will have no other means to travel, except by the sea, which is time consuming since it takes a longer period for anyone who travels by this means to get to its destination. For example, in some countries where travelling by air is expensive, citizens are mostly restricted to a particular place, not because they want to, but because they could not afford the expenses that would result in travelling by air. Tourism however, as find it much easier to travel far and wide and to explore, since the cheap air flight has made it possible to achieve their goals. Therefore, the availability of this cheap travelling means, as brought comfort to a lot of travellers. Nevertheless, despite this great impact of the air plane development, some feel this cheap air flight should be banned, because they fear it causes air pollution. There is no doubt that aeroplane causes air pollution, since it emits carbon dioxide, which is dangerous to our environment, also, the unforeseen accident that occurs from the air plane are usually disastrous which in turn may create fear in the minds of travellers. However, I believe that rather than banning this means of travelling, there are certain measures than can be taken to reduce its disadvantages in our environment In conclusion, I think the introduction of the air plane, has made life easier for travellers all over the word, and banning this fast travelling means will cause more pain than its negative impact.
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air
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, which in turn as created opportunity for average
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people
to
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travel
far and explore, since it's less expensive. Although,
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many
suggest, the less expensive
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air
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plane
should
be banned
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because
it
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causes
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air
pollution. In this article, I will discuss while the advantages of the
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air
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plane
cannot
be compared
to its disadvantages.

Without the introduction of the
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cheap
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air
flight,
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many
would in fact be leaving in the
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old
ways, as average
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travellers
will have no other
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means
to
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travel
, except by the sea, which is
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time consuming
since it takes a longer period for anyone who
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travels
by this
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means
to
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get
to its destination.
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, in
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some
countries where
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travelling
by
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air
is expensive, citizens are
mostly
restricted to a particular place, not
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because
they want to,
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but
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because
they could not afford the expenses that would result in
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travelling
by
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air
. Tourism
however
, as find it much easier to
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travel
far and wide and to explore, since the
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cheap
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air
flight has made it possible to achieve their goals.
Therefore
, the availability of this
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cheap
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travelling
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means
, as brought comfort to
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travellers
.

Nevertheless
, despite this great impact of the
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plane
development,
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some
feel this
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cheap
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flight should
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,
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because
they fear it
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causes
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air
pollution. There is no doubt that
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aeroplane
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causes
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air
pollution, since it emits carbon dioxide, which is
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dangerous
to our environment,
also
, the unforeseen accident that occurs from the
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air
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plane
are
usually
disastrous which in turn may create fear in the minds of
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travellers
.
However
, I believe that
rather
than banning this
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means
of
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travelling
, there are certain measures than can
be taken
to
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reduce
its disadvantages in our environment

In conclusion
, I
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think
the introduction of the
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air
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plane
, has made life easier for
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travellers
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all over the word
, and banning this
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fast
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travelling
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means
will
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cause
more pain than its
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negative
impact.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some workers like working for a large company. Other workers prefer working for a smaller company. Which do you like: working for a small company or working for a large company? Give specific reasons and examples to support your point of view. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
349 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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