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Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v.1

Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v. 1
Dear Mrs. Hawkins, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter concerning the book that you had lent me for my Implantology course last month. The book is the 6th edition of Essential Implantology by Dr. Mohit Salkar. Furthermore, it provides all the basic information regarding implants and their procedure, and also illustrates about recent upgrades and advancement of the subject. It was generous of you to give me this textbook. Moreover, everything in it is defined exceptionally well, and also the examples of each case with photographs have made it even simpler. In addition to this, it was incredibly helpful for my course, for instance, the course was like a practical implementation of this textbook. Earlier, it was difficult for me to go for the program, but after reading this edition it increased my confidence immensely. However, I was supposed to return it to you last week, but a few days after the program was finished, I had fallen sick, and it was awful. I had a high fever, body ache, and the doctor had recommended to rest adequately. Therefore, I was bedridden for several days and because of this I was not able to deliver the book back to you. Fortunately, I am feeling better now, and everything will be back to normal soon. Nevertheless, I apologize for the inconvenience, and I’ll be returning the edition to you, personally this time. Let me know when you are available so we could plan a meet. I hope you could understand my situation. Thanking you. Yours truly, Shakib Qureshi
Dear Mrs. Hawkins,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter concerning the book that you had lent me for my
Implantology
course last month.

The book is the 6th edition of Essential
Implantology
by Dr.
Mohit
Salkar
.
Furthermore
, it provides all the basic information regarding implants and their procedure, and
also
illustrates about recent upgrades and advancement of the subject.

It was generous of you to give me this textbook.
Moreover
, everything in it
is defined
exceptionally
well, and
also
the examples of each case with photographs have made it even simpler.
In addition
to this, it was
incredibly
helpful for my course,
for instance
, the course was like a practical implementation of this textbook. Earlier, it was difficult for me to go for the program,
but
after reading this edition it increased my confidence
immensely
.

However
, I
was supposed
to return it to you last week,
but
a few days after the program
was finished
, I had fallen sick, and it was awful. I had a high fever, body ache, and the doctor had recommended to rest
adequately
.
Therefore
, I was bedridden for several days and
because of this
I was not able to deliver the book back to you.
Fortunately
, I am feeling better
now
, and everything will be back to normal
soon
.
Nevertheless
, I apologize for the inconvenience, and I’ll be returning the edition to you,
personally
this time.
Let
me know when you are available
so
we could plan a
meet
. I hope you could understand my situation.

Thanking you.

Yours
truly
,

Shakib
Qureshi
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v. 1

Essay
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8 paragraphs
262 words
7
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