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Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v.2

Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v. 2
In todays mordern senario education is more important in life. it has been observed that in some universities students are getting admisssion on the basis of academic grades again its has been visulized that some universities prefer interview and personal statment of amit students. In my opinion i can say that universities should take admission on the basis of interview and personal statment because it is seen that student who are having high grades that can be taken by giving money to that school or institute and the student geeting grades higher it can be by mugging up the course and just writting in exam and getting high scores but if we take the interview we can see that student have thorughly understood the topic and it will never been foget by him in his carrer. In addition to it we can say that interview and the personal statment can judge the student capability and it is been seen that one electrician who was not geeting grade in school times at one site the electrician was called to repair the light and the wirerings no electrician were able to say that what was the fault over there but when he came into that room and by observing he said that here is the fault into the holder and a wellknown statment we all know that a book cannot be judge by its cover. In conclusion we can say that universities should addmit student on basis of the interview and personal statments by doing these educational society will be more developed and student will get chance to prove themself.
In
todays
mordern
senario
education is more
important
in life.
it
has
been observed
that in
some
universities
students
are getting
admisssion
on the basis of academic
grades
again its has been
visulized
that
some
universities
prefer
interview
and
personal
statment
of
amit
students.

In my opinion
i
can say that
universities
should take admission on the basis of
interview
and
personal
statment
because
it is
seen
that
student
who are having high
grades
that can
be taken
by giving money to that school or institute and the
student
geeting
grades
higher it can be by mugging up the course and
just
writting
in exam and getting high scores
but
if we take the
interview
we can
see
that
student
have
thorughly
understood the topic and it will never been
foget
by him in his
carrer
.

In addition
to
it
we can say that
interview
and the
personal
statment
can judge the
student
capability and it
is been
seen
that one electrician who was not
geeting
grade
in school times at one site the electrician
was called
to repair the light and the
wirerings
no electrician were able to say that what was the fault over there
but
when he came into that room and by observing he said that here is the fault into the holder and a
wellknown
statment
we all know that a book cannot be
judge
by its cover.

In
conclusion we
can say that
universities
should
addmit
student
on basis of the
interview
and
personal
statments
by doing these educational society will be more developed and
student
will
get
chance to prove
themself
.
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24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v. 2

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