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Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v.2

Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v. 2
In todays mordern senario education is more important in life. it has been observed that in some universities students are getting admisssion on the basis of academic grades again its has been visulized that some universities prefer interview and personal statment of amit students. In my opinion i can say that universities should take admission on the basis of interview and personal statment because it is seen that student who are having high grades that can be taken by giving money to that school or institute and the student geeting grades higher it can be by mugging up the course and just writting in exam and getting high scores but if we take the interview we can see that student have thorughly understood the topic and it will never been foget by him in his carrer. In addition to it we can say that interview and the personal statment can judge the student capability and it is been seen that one electrician who was not geeting grade in school times at one site the electrician was called to repair the light and the wirerings no electrician were able to say that what was the fault over there but when he came into that room and by observing he said that here is the fault into the holder and a wellknown statment we all know that a book cannot be judge by its cover. In conclusion we can say that universities should addmit student on basis of the interview and personal statments by doing these educational society will be more developed and student will get chance to prove themself.
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education is more
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universities
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admisssion
on the basis of academic
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grades
again its has been
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visulized
that
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universities
prefer
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interview
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personal
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students.

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interview
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personal
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statment
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student
who are having high
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grades
that can
be taken
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student
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geeting
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grades
higher it can be by mugging up the course and
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writting
in exam and getting high scores
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interview
we can
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that
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student
have
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thorughly
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we can say that
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interview
and the
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personal
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statment
can judge the
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student
capability and it
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seen
that one electrician who was not
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geeting
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grade
in school times at one site the electrician
was called
to repair the light and the
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wirerings
no electrician were able to say that what was the fault over there
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but
when he came into that room and by observing he said that here is the fault into the holder and a
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wellknown
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statment
we all know that a book cannot be
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judge
by its cover.

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conclusion we
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universities
should
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addmit
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student
on basis of the
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interview
and
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personal
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statments
by doing these educational society will be more developed and
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student
will
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get
chance to prove
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themself
.
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IELTS essay Some universities admit students on the basis of academic grades while others prefer interviews and personal statements. Discuss v. 2

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4 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
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