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Some students prefer classes with open discussions between theprofessor and students and almost no lectures. Other students preferclasses with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v.2

Some students prefer classes with open discussions between theprofessor and students and almost no lectures. Other students preferclasses with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 2
There are many different types of Learning patterns, which are student develops. In my opinion, discussion with lecture is the most crucial part which a student can adapt in order to understand the concepts and structure of the subject. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, Lecturer have good amount of knowledge which they can share amongst their students for their better understanding. They have good command over the subject so they are the good hub for learning more about certain topic. I think, students should always go through specific module and discussed the same with their professor so as to learn best from their point of view. For Example, I was not good in Computing subject in my academics, so I always used to discuss my understanding with the professor, so I can get less difficulties in the subject this has always help me a lot to overcome difficulties in my subject. Secondly, They are well aware about the important tips and trick for the subject which eventually are most beneficially for a student to crack their exams. For Instance, When i was in my last year my professor use to mention certain important topic which you should always learn. she used to provide some sort of template for the paper presentation, which has always help students to complete the task very soon without taking more time along, with that it has help us to understand properly. In conclusion, I believe that student should always have discussed with their professor because, it not only strengthened the teacher student relationship, but also seems to be more efficient from student end to understand the concept as per the teacher' s perspective.
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different
types of Learning patterns, which are
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student
develops. In my opinion, discussion with lecture is the most crucial part which a
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student
can adapt in order to understand the concepts and structure of the
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subject
. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To
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begin
with, Lecturer have
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good
amount of knowledge which they can share amongst their
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students
for their better understanding. They have
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good
command over the
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subject
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so
they are the
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good
hub for learning more about certain topic. I
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,
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students
should always go through specific module and discussed the same with their
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professor
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so as to
learn best from their point of view.
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, I was not
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good in Computing
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subject
in my academics,
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so
I always
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used
to discuss my understanding with the
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,
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I can
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difficulties in the
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this has always
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me a lot to overcome difficulties in my subject.

Secondly
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tips and
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for the
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which
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to crack their exams.
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, When
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i
was in my last year my
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professor
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use to
mention certain
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topic which you should always learn.
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to provide
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sort of template for the paper presentation, which has always
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help
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to complete the task
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soon
without taking more time along, with that it has
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help
us to understand
properly
.

In conclusion
, I believe that
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student
should always have discussed with their
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professor
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strengthened the teacher
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relationship,
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also
seems to be more efficient from
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student
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to understand the concept as per the
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IELTS essay Some students prefer classes with open discussions between theprofessor and students and almost no lectures. Other students preferclasses with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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